That was a smart ending, and very cute too! At first I was upset because it seemed like Mirai won (and though I was on his side in the beginning I was really starting to like your Trunks!) so I'm glad that Trunks got his own Vegeta too. And he sounds VERY cute. ^_^

Very interesting... I loved it! Hehe. I was not sure about half way through, but I'm happy that I finished it. I was not liking the fact that Chibi was not getting Vegeta, but I'm happy that I finished it and that Chibi got 'a' Vegeta. :) (fav)

interesting

I liked it, very cute!

wow this is a really great fic but i gotta say i favor chibi trunks more!

I loved this story. Too often, incest between characters is destroyed and detestable. But you made it into a flawless work of perfection. Kudos to you.

sweet

yay

AW!! loved the ending! so kawaii! im happy that both trunks-kuns got their veggie-heads! GREAT JOB!

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it's still not fair but i'll live!

it's not fair! i hate mirai now! i think i'm gonna stop reading these kind of stories cause they always make me crazy!
yeah right! mirai would not be able to beat trunks! why did you include trunks in the equation if mirai was going to win anyway! I hope trunks dies so his misery can and and he can be at peace.

if i were trunks i would have killed mirai along time ago! its not fair! marai trunks shouldn't even be around! his time ceased to excist when the others fixed everything and killed the androids so mirai shouldn't even be in the story! it's just not FAIR! WAH!

Your fic was great. I don't know yet if you've written any other DBZ fics but i am definately going to look for them. Thank you so much for givin Trunks and mira both happy endings. That made the story very thourough. Oh and. very cool idea with the alternating POV's. It was like reading two stories in one.

That was a great fic, well done; most definitely loved the fight sequence and the love seens, oh I just loved it.

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