An interesting and satisfying view of the relationship between Yuki and Shuichi (as well as good insight into their characters). And done with minimal use of swear words! I am grateful to you for that! Anyway, thanks for your story!

yep i think your right he does deserve to be happy! Ahh love!! great fic!

* Tears* Its Beautiful...
WAHA! *TEars* Pure Poetry

This fic is just too good *starry eyes*

*melts* One word: AW! Perfectly in character too! *dies*

That was beautiful. I was smiling as I read it. I just love Yuki POVs. Probably because in the series we only rarely get a glimpse of his true feelings (though those occurences do grow as the series progresses). Still, I just love Yuki... to bad he's taken, hee hee hee ^.~

This is god! Yuki's so kawaii when he smiles. ^__^

oh i just want to say, i love this fic and i love it so much when yuki is musing over shu as he sleeps.

This is so good! >< Hehehe, I love it. Please write more soon! ^^

~firedraygon97

Kudos to you! *bows* There's nothing to drive my addiction like a well-written Yuki-POV Gravi fic, and I think you allowed me to indulge a bit too much with this wondrous confection. I love the way you keep Yuki teetering around the edges of mush, but refusing to go there even in the deepest corners of his mind. It truly is dead-on characterization, and that does a heart something awesome.

I loved it. Your charactezation was amazing. Hope to see more Gravitation fics from you.

Yes! I loved it! Yuki's mind is so fun to get into ne? ^-^
Great job, I love this kind of portrayal of Yuki; I can't stand the fics where he's nothing but a cold bastard and can't say anything but "Hn." I mean, even in the anime he actually 'talks'! And he's an author, you'd think he'd have a bigger vocab...
Heh, I'm rambling. Anyway great job, I hope you write something else soon!
~Hota =^-^=

I normally don't like fics like this, but you did a particularly good job. I relly enjoyed it! You conveyed Eiri well. Nice work!
~*~Lo0n

A lovely read ; I enjoyed the way you placed Yuki's thoughts and feelings next to Yuki's words and actions ; they make an interesting contrast.

I love your fic because THIS is the real Eiri, no that stupid bastard copy from the anime. I haven't seen the OVA's but looks like they're more based in the manga, thought...