I've just finished reading your trilogy and I can say one word: AMAZING!
It's probably the best B/V fanfiction I've ever read, the best on this site and in whole Internet. Bulma nad Vegeta are so full of life, so believable and canonical, even if you've changed them a little - for the better, of course. You've gave them rich personalities and made them so damn real that it's hard to believe that they're from silly shonen anime about fighting. You've changed them from plain and a bit exaggerated characters to human, sophisticated people with so many layers, that they seem to be alive.

You are so talented and I'm glad that you've came back to writing in this Fandom after little (ok, almost 3 years is not so little XD) break. It seems that I've read all of your works already and I'm willing to see somethnig new from you.
Really, I'd heard before that Darke Angelus is an great author, but what I've get was beyond any of my expectations. You are awesome, my dear. Pure awesomness!

“What happen to my fish?” he asked no one in particular. The water was curiously empty.

“Fishys- YUM!” Trunks gurgled.

“You ate them!” Vegeta screamed.

That part made me ROTFLMAO. I got up from the computer for 2 min. and the I continued reading. The end was beautiful.

Great work.

What did Bulma do?
As sweet natured as he was, the young Namek could never completely forget the carnage that Vegeta had wrought on his home planet, now dust on the solar winds. A good many of his pod-brothers and sisters

How can Dende have sister, when everyone in his race his male.

Great work like always.

“But it’ll slow them down, right? Yamacha and the rest of the Z Fighters can handle it after that. That’s what the Government pays them for! To clean up threats to the Earth!”

Wow. So the government knows that Hercule din't defeat Cell. How much does the Z fighters make, because considering the amount of food Goku eat. Great work. Bulma the Bait. Nice name right?

Great work.

Posing together in the photo, Bulma was happily wearing the blue groom hat while the Saiyan, obviously in a pout, was sporting the bright pink cap that said “BRIDE”

Great work. Go Bulma.

Great work.
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The pictures loaded and Tien took his time regarding the Saiyan’s ‘assets’.

“Hm,” he said with a vague smile.

So thats the reason things with Launch didn't work out.

Great work. 18 kick his **.

Great work.

That, was a gift from her father.

OMFG! Dorothy had a kid with Vegeta! Or at least i think its Vegeta.

Dorothy Pereaux Not her again. Great work.

This was so beautiful.

Great work.

Oh my, I couldnt handle Vegeta having an afair with Dorothy (even though he had broken up with Bulma then), now having another child with that woman?
Oh man, Im not sure I can read the next chapter ... Sorry I think I will move on and read something else until I can calm my senses and continue.
No offence, its a great story, and the Dorothy part was a good twist. Its just my thing.

Hi there.

Just reading over the third story in the only B/V trilogy worth reading on this website...

:)

...and I was just curious about this chapter in particular, the Australian one.

As I read it through, being Australian myself, I kind of went from amusement to suprise to confusion. Most of these slang terms I have never heard of before, and I've been to some pretty bogan places. I'm not sure if you are from Australia yourself, or if you know our culture and were just humourously exaggerating it...But if you aren't...my god, I didn't understand half of what was said.

Don't get me wrong, I love this trilogy, and I don't have any problems. I'm just curious where you're coming from in this particular chapter...If you didn't realise, Australians don't actually talk like that..not even the ones in the Northern Territory use slang to that extent.

I suppose it just pays to be careful when writing about other cultures and places. If I wrote an American story, no doubt it would be cliched and weird to people who actually lived there.

So yeah. I love the story...it's just the way our culture is presented here that worries me a little.

Oh well. Ignore me if you want. I don't know where you're coming from. If you are Aussie, then I am pleased to find another on this site. They're a rarity, I can tell you.

Best wishes,

Taluliaka