Oh my, I couldnt handle Vegeta having an afair with Dorothy (even though he had broken up with Bulma then), now having another child with that woman?
Oh man, Im not sure I can read the next chapter ... Sorry I think I will move on and read something else until I can calm my senses and continue.
No offence, its a great story, and the Dorothy part was a good twist. Its just my thing.

Hi there.

Just reading over the third story in the only B/V trilogy worth reading on this website...

:)

...and I was just curious about this chapter in particular, the Australian one.

As I read it through, being Australian myself, I kind of went from amusement to suprise to confusion. Most of these slang terms I have never heard of before, and I've been to some pretty bogan places. I'm not sure if you are from Australia yourself, or if you know our culture and were just humourously exaggerating it...But if you aren't...my god, I didn't understand half of what was said.

Don't get me wrong, I love this trilogy, and I don't have any problems. I'm just curious where you're coming from in this particular chapter...If you didn't realise, Australians don't actually talk like that..not even the ones in the Northern Territory use slang to that extent.

I suppose it just pays to be careful when writing about other cultures and places. If I wrote an American story, no doubt it would be cliched and weird to people who actually lived there.

So yeah. I love the story...it's just the way our culture is presented here that worries me a little.

Oh well. Ignore me if you want. I don't know where you're coming from. If you are Aussie, then I am pleased to find another on this site. They're a rarity, I can tell you.

Best wishes,

Taluliaka

The third pard of BV trilogy is fun to read,and funny as hell.I like the way you bend the fact a bit here and there so that everything sounds logical to your fanfics(from part 1 'till part 3).And how you cover up all those lopes that the original comic never explain.You did an AMAZING job,a hell of a GREAT work~~!!
Too bad you quit ,well i hope someday you'll start posting on again.Until then,take care~~!! n_n

PS:You keep me up and late every single night 'till i finished all 3...Not many authors can do that... ;)

Wow! is my only response. It was well written and very exciting but there's one thing that bothers me...What happened to Veronica?

you probably don´t even read these reviews anymore, what with you being retired from everything and all, but I just had to tell you, that you accomplished actually making me cry twice during this whole trilogy. The second time was this last chapter, especifically when he shows her through memory, how she makes him feel. Rats, how dare you make me shed a tear! Just when I thought that wasn´t possible. No more mailing list? No more nothing? It is such a pity. How has life been? If only you could share some of that with us. I am sorry I arrived when you had already retired.

awesome!

beautiful!
I loved it!
I actually cried when I read Vegeta's memory in the ice world!
the end of it was the best!
too bad he didn't get his tail though...!
poor Vegeta...
good one!
Karush^-^

that was excellent...

I loved the trilogy, but from all the three I like this better...

Damm... I cannot believe you made Dorothy have his child, now he has to children, besides Bra that one day will come, that is just mean of you. Will that tramp use it... How will Bulma react to it...

Oh wow... Your Vegeta and Bulma trilogy has kept me up SO late. All three stories are gorgeous and well-written. Great work! :)

There aren't words to describe this perfect story...

Parts of it did confuse me a bit, like the dorothy scenes

And Trunks kept me laughing the whole time!

The way they interacted with each other was great, so in character (although I thought Mrs. Brief said something a bit too smart for herself once, though lol)

GREAT STORY!

best bulma and vegeta story i've ever read... (all three parts, that is)

So I finally made time to finish the fic (Actually I used school paper to print the last two chapters off so that I could read them in class...lol). Once again you have proven that you are by far the greatest writer on this site or any other for that matter. Neither your artwork nor your writing ever fails to impress and I thank you for being willing to share it with us.

Thank you,
JB

P.S. By the way, your baby Trunks scenes are the best and compare with the show itself. They're just that damn funny.

So funny! and so romantic! How happy i am that i've finished reading your story knowing that i will not forget about this fic for a very, very, very, very, very long time. i loved this story so much. i love how you described Bulma's,Vegeta's and other characters personalities so well and Trunks... What a trouble maker to everyone! especially to Bulma's parents! i don't think i've ever read a Dbz story that is filled with so much action, is so unpredictable, kepps me interested even with three parts to it and amusing all the way through! So amusing i'm still laughing (he he :)) i don't think one chapter was boring at all! This fic is really well written and i don't think i can choose which was the best of the trilogy's! Finally i loved how you added so many different genres to this story! Romance between Bulma and Vegeta, Comedy with trunks, tradegy, suspence, jealousy and many more. i can't wait to finish reading your other stories!

Well done!!

Such a good story, and Trunks was a hoot. Awesome job.

-P.G.