This was excellent. I don't think I read this one completely the first time but I am glad I stayed up to read this. Please write more stories. Oh, one critique, when the thunderkittens were watching chilla and damien leave they said or thought that they didn't want to be seen by damien or celeste. They didn't know about celeste at the time and I am sure you meant to type chilla's name in there. Other than that error, it was perfect.

Quite good. Plays out like an episode. Please add more to it if you can.

Cool story! Write more.

Wow, they're both on the defensive. I hope you write more of this soon, I'd love to read the next part. Will Chilla and Tygra fall prey to the mysterious creatures' wiles? I think they already have, if only partly so. Celeste and Damien really are too good to be true. Please continue this cliffhanger soon!

I definitely like this story so far, poor Cheetara..Monkian and Alluro too. I knew that the Lunatacs and the mutants would somehow find out and try for the elixer themselves, they always do that. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hmm..is there somthing more than friendly devotion that Tygra has for Cheetara? _

I like what I read.And this is a 10!Luna actually talkin with the Thundercats!I love it!