its was good please update

hey it was fine for your first time i liked it more then other stories ive read and dont worry i suck at dialogue too

You're dialogue doesn't suck! It needs a bit of working on, but it definitly beats out a lot of other fics. Great plot, update soon!

Hey,
I thought that this story is SO good, PLEASE WRITE MORE! You are a great writer, who is inspired by a lot of things! Keep up the wonderful work!

would you PLEASE update already? lol it's been so long! =(

please update!!

Love it so far! Now THIS is an original story!

CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

UPDATE ASAP!

omg! I really love this story! it's so good! please give Harry his memory back! please! this is really good, but you asked for constructive criticism, I'll give you some... you should read over your chapter before you upload, to take care of mistake and things like that, that's why I usaully do, when I'm not being lazy. ^_^ I have nothing else to say, this story is just so wonderful! there is nothing wrong with what you wrote, it's great! please update soon... you're going on my favorite stories list =D

Hey this a really good story. Please do not stop writting it! Yuor dialoge is fine so don't worry about it!

i think your story is great.i hope you write some more chapters soon.im from britain where you from?

Hey! I was finally able to get onto ff.net. Yay! Neways, as I promised I was to review your new Harry Potter fanfiction. This is a great plot. I was a big fan of Harry Potter a few years ago, but I kind of moved on. I still read J.K.'s work and all but I'm not that big of a fanatic. Keep up the good work...the plot is good and I was impressed with the detail of the pain Harry was put through. I'll keep on checking in on updates on this and other stories. ^ - ^

that you will grow up to be a great writer someday.

Sorry about the mix up g2g.
See ya