 RogueOnFire 3/7/07 . chapter 1I love your stories, and they make me laugh. I'm proud of reading them because they're so professional! That's all your stories, I mean.
ROF |
 GuesssWho 1/12/06 . chapter 6In '1984,' the torture-room was Room 101. Did you know that? |
 Titan09 7/3/05 . chapter 12WAH! So sad! *sob* Poor Two and Angel :(
Magnificently written. I'm SERIOUSLY looking forward to a sequel. *wink*
Wonderful job and thanks for posting!
-Titan @}- |
 Black Garnet 3/28/05 . chapter 1Dear Twin One,
sorry that I'm doing this again but this was the only way I could get ahold of you. I accidentally deleted the last e-mail you sent me and I can't find your e-mail address anywhere! If you could e-mail me again I would be much abliged! |
 sirocco.flow 8/1/04 . chapter 12oh...my...gosh! that's /such a cool story/! i can't believe i never had time 2 read it b4! im so glad i finaly found the time. now al i gota 2 is make time 4 the sequel - realy dont wana miss that! |
 Black Garnet 12/30/03 . chapter 12 This was a good story! For some reason lately I've been finding a lot of stories were the main character is a girl, and the girl is telling the story. Plus this the first and probably only Matrix story I found that has no swearing, and is clean. If you ever want to find another Matrix story that has no swearing and is clean, your more than welcome to read mine! It's called "The Dreamweaver" by Black Garnet (me!).
Sincerely Black Garnet
P.S. I LOVED your story! |
 Cassie-bear01 12/17/03 . chapter 12to me it felt like you rushed the last chapter but i like it, i love the twins! m yummyness! |
 SugarIcing 11/20/03 . chapter 11ok...i reveiwed the last chapter already so i had to reveiw this one instead. this is the coolest story. i read it twice. can you PLEASE make a sequel? i lurve them twins...
icing :P |
 Devilish Kurumi 11/17/03 . chapter 12Aw, couldn't they have just stayed herre? *whines*
I know how you feel, writing the end to a story can be a hard thing, especially if you put alot into it, like I can see you did with this. You know, you could... Nah... Well... Sequels can always be fun, as long as they're either pure smut or have a plot... *winkwinknudgenudge* |
 SugarIcing 11/15/03 . chapter 12aww! Two was so adorable...i just wanna hug him and kiss him and name him George...wait. Two's cooler. and One is great too. the quiet type...*sigh*. i really envy you, you know. getting to meet the Twins and stuff...and Neo...and them...and stuff. i almost cried! *sniffles* that was touching...I LURVE THOSE TWINSS! please write some more something else. cuz that was something else.
icing :P |
 Matrix-Twin1 8/16/03 . chapter 3Aw! Poor Two! Evil, sadistic Nurse! Great Fic, though... |
 Dylan Livewire 7/30/03 . chapter 12 Wow... just, wow. I LOVED this! *put it on favorites* This was so cute! _
The only constructive critisism I have is that you made the Twins warm up to Angel a little too soon, but it was still an awesome fic! :-D
Dylan |
 Fluffy the Pedestrian Slayer 7/28/03 . chapter 12This is so good and really sad at the end.
Is there a sequel?
I hope there is coz i want Angel to see the Twins again!
If not, then WRITE ONE PLEASE! |
 Kit19 7/27/03 . chapter 12Sorry , i tried not to cry *sobs* but it didnt work *sniffles* :'D
That was so great :') It was so happy and sad at the same time :) It's hard to write something with such powerfull emotion but you managed it perfectly :)
Your writing style is discriptive and well thought out :)
I hope you write more like this :) It was too good not to read :D
Thankyou for such a great story to read :)
Seeya :') x |
 Starlight8 7/27/03 . chapter 12I have really enjoyed this story.
And I'm sad to see it's ended.
I suppose there is no hope of a sequel?
I liked the way you made the twins slightly different from each other rather than be carbon copies. It made it more interesting.
Good luck with whatever you choose to write next. |