Reviews for Aideen and Ciar: First Strike

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Damron Girl 2007-08-19 ch 2,	abuseOMG! LOL! This is funny stuff man! ^^ Can't stop laughing! It's just that funny! ^^ Ojo fainted in the grave. lol. ^^ Love this story! ^^
Axel629 2006-05-17 ch 2,	abuselmao. this story's so funny. hey if you want, check out my ff, Ed the Teen Titan.
wind-dancer99 2006-01-12 ch 1,	abuseHmm,I agree with whoever said that the witch lady had too much time on his/her hands...or they witchness took the whole "FanFiction Contract" (on correcting grammer/spelling) a little too seriously. Anyways, I believe she had a few fragment and/or runon sentences in her response... but it was a fun story
Shanghai Honey 2005-09-08 ch 2,	abuseI love your story, and jeez, what's up with the witch lady? I mean, I was bored, so I decided to look up on all of your reviews, then I came across of THE WITCHNESS. I was so irritated! I couldn't believe how many times she kept correcting you! I mean...Jeez! People make mistakes! Nobody's perfect. I personally loved your story, still do:) Please continue and ignore the witch. BYE!
Shanghai Honey 2005-09-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was so funny!
Gem.India 2005-04-08 ch 2,	abuseGood Story. WOW, it seems witchness has way too much time on her hands. I thought was a spelling freak!
Mettalic darkness 2004-11-02 ch 2,	abuseYEY!! Bear dead ^_^!
Lapen 2004-04-17 ch 2,	abuseYES!! Death to the stupid bear! XD Great story!
CHEATLETHEFAG 2004-01-09 ch 2,	abuseThank you, Thank you for all your reviews. Especially the ones telling the Witchness to back off.
Dough Monkey 2004-01-09 ch 2,	abuseHAHAHA! That's funny! Slaughtering big bear and his friends is an excellent story plot! You've made it into my favorite author list. Congrats on the story!
Locke05 2004-01-07 ch 1,	abuseDon't listen to what that Witchness or whatever tells you. This story is nothing less than a masterpiece. And I'm not being sarcastic.
Kewen 2003-12-27 ch 2,	abuseWhoa, "TheWitchness", sure you don't like the story, but you need to get a sense of humour. I sugest you go to w.badgerbadgerbadger.com and look at it until it becomes funny. What?
cheesebadger 2003-11-22 ch 1,	abuseJeez the witchness, you may not like the story but you don't have to be such an ** about it.
Wirez 2003-08-06 ch 2,	abuseYOU NEED MENTAL HELP! but that story was HELLA FUNNY!
TheWitchness 2003-08-03 ch 2,	abuseThe double spacing between all the sentences is just atrocious. Save that for school printouts. Now: It was a time of mourning. A time of sorrow. A time of revenge. It was Bear's funeral. "I thought we finished that stupid little bear off!" Aideen said to Ciar. - Um his dead body being in the coffin . . . wouldn't that make him "finished off"? > "EXACTLY,stupid! That's the point. ANd we can throw that damned lemur in too!(Treelo)." Aideen cried. - First, you have "n" capitalized in "and". Second, you shouldn't use the paranthesis there. Just insert Treelo's name after lemur. >But Ojo couldn't move bcuz he was both braindead and paralyzed.- Now you have gone and done it! bcuz? What the ? Are we talking on AOL? What the hell! It's because. Take the extra 3-4 keystokes and type out the whole god-damned word! >They grabbed Ojo and threw him in the coffin.There was no burial crew because they had to stop for coffee.- Yeah, THAT makes sense. I know at every sigle funeral I have gone to right in the middle of the burial the crew leaves for coffee . . . right! She tied them up, and left them in the cemetery parking lot, near her precious mustang(Aideen hates most ppl, but she loves that mustang). - Fist- Mustang, for the 100th time NEEDS TO BE CAPITALIZED!! And the fact that you used it twice is ever stupier. Second, you did it again! ppl? What the hell? >Then, they put the coffin lid over Bear's decapitated body and the braindead Ojo. Who was screaming through layers of bandages. - First, brain dead people do not scream. The don't do anything because they are technically dead. Second, brain dead is TWO words. >They backed up, "accidentally" running over Pip and Pop.- It wasn't an accident so why say it is? > They had no idea that Ojo was in there too, because by now he had fainted from fear. - Bain dead people do not faint either!

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