I enjoyed this through and through and it was so heartwarming. Not to mention the characters were definitely themselves. Good job!

Did I mention that was so adorable? No, I guess not. I love this!

I liked the story but hopefully did more please

Wow, this is pretty good! I've been looking for some good Bug's Life romance (these isn't much...) but you did well on this! I'm more of a Hopper/Adda fan but Molt with a girl just sounds cute xD

DUDE. Sparky, I didn't know ya wrote a Bugs Life fanfic! I was just skimmin' through and saw your name, then kinda freaked out. XD

As usual, your writing skills are AWESOME, and, uh, stuff. I wish you'd write more...

Great story!

I love this story. I look forward to seeing more of it.

AW! so cute i liked it i'm going to read all the chapters and comment one all of them i would have commented on chapter 1 but i had to get an acount and by that time i was half way done with chapter 2 so anyway grat story i like Trill she sound so cute! :3

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that was an awesome story!.. i wish you good luck with all the other stories that you write.. you really have a talent for writing! i almost thought that trill was really going to stay... keep writing! (please!)
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sparky that was an awesome chappie! i loved it.. the suspense you bring to the story is so amazing!
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ya gotta feel sorry for molt... getting all chewed up by p.t. but what's going to happen when the circus leaves? you can tell i'm very curious to find out what happens next in your story...
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aww... that's soo sweet! i guess molt's smarter than he looks like to be able to describe all of those things, huh?? can't wait to find out what happens next!
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this is looking like a great story so far... but i do think that maybe you could make molt's character a bit more goofy.. ya know.. stuttering and clumsy and all that kind of stuff.. it just might really capture his emotions better than him being a tad too serious... but other than that .. great story!
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Wonderful story. A very cute plot. I really like Molt- he's one of my favorites in the movie. You wrote him very well! Will there be any more?

I can't wait to see what happens next..

WOW... This is SO awesome. I love it so much! It's beautifully writtena nd very believable (you know what I mean).