 ReverendKilljoy 11/29/04 . chapter 1An amusing interlude. I think some of the reflections and connections are a bit short-handed. I know what you mean, and you now what you mean, but the characters seem to be rushing, especially Donna's assessment of Amanda's relationship.
Still, the set up works as a dramtic device despite the rushing. Overall, a nice piece that works to contrast relationships via the incongruous juxtaposition of the three couples. Thanks for posting. |
 Ishmael 7/11/03 . chapter 1I really, really liked that. "somehow, not as gruff as Toby"? that was extremely funny. But, on the whole, a very well-written fic focusing on something close to J/D hearts... why the hell can't Josh grow up? Hehe.
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