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| HermioneandMarcus 2008-04-28 ch 4,  | abuseGreat story and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can please |
| writnIStherapy05 2003-08-16 ch 4, | abuselove ur fic.update soon!! |
| Hestia 2003-07-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseDear Brandy James First let me tell you that I like your story idea very much. I love any story where a woman gets to kick butt. I would like to advise you on one thing. The POV of your story keeps switching from first person to third person. This makes the story a little confusing. You may want to watch out for that on future stories Sincerly Hestia |
| ScottCaan'sChick 2003-07-13 ch 6, | abusePlease update soon! This is getting great! |
| Moonlights Sundance 2003-07-13 ch 6, | abuseShe addmitted it, horray. I am so glad. What about Jim? Will Jesse ever except this? So much I need to know. Please update soon. C Ya. -Moon |
| Christina 2003-07-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat Job please continue soon I love this story and the whole Jim/Cole thing is great keep up the good work |
| Moonlights Sundance 2003-07-12 ch 5, | abuseOH my. This is excellent. I really, really, really like the story and I can not wait until you update. Please do it soon. I want to know what is going to happen. Poor Cole he didn't do anything. I feel bad for him. Plus Jim has got some attitude and nerve. One he lies to his older brother and two what he says to Brandy. Jesse, why did he have to punch Cole? Jesse needs to think before he acts. All well. I still love it and can not wait until the next chapter. UPDATE SOON! C YA. -Moon |
| ScottCaan'sChick 2003-07-12 ch 5, | abuseNice job. Especially the part where Jesse punches Cole! (LOL) But Jim is really being a jerk, I hope he gets punched out in one of the chapters! |
| Christina 2003-07-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseCole Cole Cole that would make a great scene I can def. see Cole getting mad at Jim Great Work. |
| A Cole Fan 2003-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseCome on Cole would be more forward then that. Jesse and Cole have a good relationship so Cole would tell Jesse what's on his mind. |
| A James Younger Gang Fan 2003-07-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseCome on Cole wouldn't act like that, you must have not watched the movie. Please watch it and writ this better. You need to have more scences with Tom,Loni, Bob, Jim, Clell (not Celle). It's lacking the rest of the gang. Add them and the story will get better. |
| Christina 2003-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseWonderful. I hope you get into more about Jim and Brandy in the next chapter. Keep up the great work |
| A Jesse fan 2003-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseZee is more upright then you wrote her to be. Don't make her out to be the damsel in distress. Brandy is okay. I like her. What the deal with her and the gang. |
| ScottCaan'sChick 2003-07-08 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great chapter! Please update soon! |
| ScottCaan'sChick 2003-07-08 ch 2, | abuseThis story is really getting good! There's one thing I'm confused about though. Does Cole have a crush on Brandy or does Clell? Anyway, it's really good! |