Good story, good story. Rather confusing, but much easier to understand with only one Neville per universe.

now i am very confused. wat the hell just happened? who was controlling who? and who did they mean to cobntrol and why would NEv know the password to dumbledore's office and who shot the avada kedavra and why did ron have the cloak and WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ABOUT! I'm gunna stick with this story, becasue it's a good story, you just seem to have a bit (a lot) of trouble making it coherent and understandable. i think i get it basically, kinda.

Great story but I'm getting very confused quite often. 0Sometimes i have to read a passage quite a few times to grasp what you're trying to say, or who's speaking and this takes away form the quality of writing. have you got a beta? if not, you should get someone to read through all of your stories before posting them, to make sure there are no mistakes as it's easier for someone lese to spot them, as they don';t know what you're trying to say. I'll do it if you have any more. just click on ym name and send me an email.

I think you did a very good job! I'm still slightly confused as to everything that occurred, but I understood most of it. I enjoyed reading this fic.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!

The Death Eaters are going DOWN!

Very suspenseful... And nice try... But I'm an eternal optimist... As long as the author leaves a vague possiblity of hope!
(And that isn't a chalenge to erase hope! I like Hope! :)


Just curious... It was deatheaters who died... Anyone in particualar or just random people?

And the 'he's going to hit you... the wand'... Um... Who is she talking about... and is 'he' going to hit neville with a spell or the actual wand?

LOL! Imagaine them trying to duel by wacking eachother with they're wands!
Okay... LOL!

Oh yeah... and is the 'he' Nev under possetion? What is with Nev? Are they in the same world?

My reading comp. lowers slightly when it's 10 minutes until my bed time... LOL!

This is still a great and Facinating Fic!

UPDATE SOON!

Cool!
The good guys are winning... right?
Exciting...
UPDATE SOON!

Interesting. Sometimes I find it very confusing, but other times, it makes complete sense. Will Susan get out of the place she's trapped in? Well, I can't wait to see what else will happen next. I like how you changed things around betwix the worlds.

Ah! Finally! A chapter I haven't review!

What ship? In your authors note at the end of the last chapter you say "The ship in question, incidentally, was HMS Sheffield, in the Falklands war, hit by an Exocet missile. True story! The Monty python team who wrote the song were ‘really moved’." I didn't notice any ships... but that might be because I'm a little tired after a long day of sailing... Oh well. E-mail me back please.

Which part of this was the bright side?

LOLOLOL!

The story's still great!

Well, UPDATE SOON!

Nice job. It's a little confusing, but I'm enjoying it. It's a very creative idea.

Oh! Another CLIFFY! That makes two really big ones in a row, and the first one didn't even get solved yet! LOL! Great suspense builder!

UPDATE SOON!

Okay, why does Neville have the scar? Is he in the same possition as Nev, and they're over lapping or something?

Another Cool Chapter! Although I'm not quite sure I understood what was happening... But then I maybe am not suppossed to understand everthing yet...

So, is neville under the impierios curse? Or is his family? Why are they attacking eachother? Or does nevill just think that his relatives are death eathers? I'm just a bit confused.

I don't know. I'm a bit tired right now.

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Hmm. I think I take back what I said about Nev having it better then Neville. He's more confident, better friends, more dangers and stresses vs. worry, fear, trying to fit in, more clumsy
tough trade off. But that makes it all the more interesting...
I get to see which one is actually happier... although they both have it pretty tough. It would be interesting to see how you manage the ending. It would be really cool if you could twist the story so that he has a happy ending, or so that both of them do...

Okay. Well you asked me to point out what I liked best, so I'm rereading your story. Before I just liked it because it was a cool idea and a fun story. I like stories that have good strong characters to carry the story.
I still like reading it a second time because it has a lot of complexity. The aura of suspense you create is quite wonderfully more subtile than mine. I think mines a little blunt. But that's the way I am. Anyways, back to your story. I really liked how you transformed JKRs almost sterio typical (Actually I can't say that after the fifth book, but... oh well) Neville, in to Nev, a very likeable interesting secretive complex character, who has obviously been through a lot, but had a better life than Neville.
Also another thing I like about your story is that it is true to cannon. And the fannon character is quite believable. (well, in comparison to Harry Potter/not real life LOL!:)
I also like that it takes a bit of intelegence to piece together your story.
Thanx! for writing this story, reading and reviewing my story, and Updating!! !Which I'm sure you'll do SOON! RIGHT? :)

I like your story so far, and I like the way you explained the link between the two AU.