...*sniffle*...*sniffle*...
Really...really sad. i really liked that, and somehow my heart feels heavy now with Zax's hopefull last line fo the story. This fic seems to fit well in place as following your Forgotten Daze, too.
Just... really good. :glomps Speaker:

fic makes me feel warm and empty.
a worthwhile read.

"A good shave, a warm bed, hot food, and a thesaurus."

love that line

Oh, so sad. To think what happens next... but I won't spoil it for anyone who hasn't played the game yet. This story is so well written and it captures Zack's personality and his feelings for Cloud so well. One of my favorite pairings and you did it just a just job.

Aw, that was so sweet, and so sad! Sad because I know what is going to happen. This was a great story!

I love Zack and Cloud!

A beautiful and very well-written look into Zack's mind. The imagery is vivid, the language is elegant but not stiff and the tone is warm and personal. Lovely work!