Beautiful

Not bad, but not the best.

The song is pretty corny. Nice fic, but I would have liked it better if there had been actual W/S shippiness...

Love, love, loved it! Works great as a friendship piece, and your take on the undead-Buffy dynamic is very new and realistic.

Wow, that was...emotive, I think is the word I want. Good job.

this story hits you right in the heart. i love it. Just try to use spell check a bit more and read through to pick mistakes up.