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| Alex Warlorn 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseUnlike your other summary style story, this one doesn't seem to a true or complete conclusion, a little strange. |
| Data Seeker 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseDear Chronos the Cat Great story plot! Complex and interesting. The story's primary flaw is that there is no dialogue. Its just pure narration. Dialogue and interaction is part of a story. The wholesome standards are high. Clean language. Nothing suggestively offensive. No extreme violence or any other vile content. I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless. Data Seeker |
| Chronos the Cat 2003-07-08 ch 1, | abuseUnfortunatly, I don't see that I'll have the time to write a detailed version of this story. Doubt I'll even be able to finish planning it... However, if anyone else should be willing to take up either challenge, just let me know. All I ask is you give me credit for the idea, and let me read the finished product. (If I really like it, I might possibly even put it up on my site... No promises, mind you.) |