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| Genzo Wakabayashi 2008-03-03 ch 1,  | abusePauvre lei ! |
| tsukushi 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseyou have watch xmen 3..?how nice..i'm having my exam at the moment..so yeah..*cries buckets of tears*,well.i never posted my stories before..cause..well..all of them are stuck..*grins sheepishly*..anyway,i think this would be my last reply caused i'm replying you through reviews..and they are denying most of them..but,glad to know i made your day.*jumps around estactically*. |
| twilightstarz 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abusevery well written! I lyke how it's from Lei's perspective...very sad and touching...*sighz* there are barely any lei and shancai fics out there... |
| you know who 2003-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusewoah! i never thought i'll be mentioned. i know i said that i won't review you til you have installed your 4th chapter... but as you can see... i like the last line, we dream of something that which we can never attain. and in the end, it is also the only thing that keeps us going. i know i told you that i like TxT fics, but somehow i just can't stand the thought of a happy couple and a lonely rui. anyways, as to the technical aspect of your story. it's clear, concise and well-written. the feelings and emotions of the persona is seen without undermining grammar. it's a good though sad piece... make many more... see, I didn't call you dumb **. until next time. Muah... |
| Angel72 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abusei love where u write about Lei's thoughts and stuff.. but do u have to make him miserable like that? i see the pairing Dms and Sc.. uh oh. bad news for an r/t fan lyk me.. but still, itz pretti well written (despite the fact that itz t/t?!) sorry, this is not a flame.. =P just encouragement to make it r/t |