*reads it over and over again* I was tickled pink by this story. It's so cute!

I got all warm and fuzzy at the end of it, good way of putting it in the summary :) This story is already on my favourites :D.

All in all, I

( Ugh. )
What?
( More sequel-hounds...)

Reminds me of a Hatching.
( Heh - you actually remember? )
I had to raise four of the frigging things.
( So you DO remember. )
How could I forget? Becoming a father of four, with no wife, and a slightly irate Dragon as a companion?
( Heh - *blushes* )
Yes. It wasn't necessary to try and kill me.
( I wonder if those islands are still smouldering... )
After nearly 510 years? Not likely.

Another good story. Another story that could be applied to just about anything.
( You included the basic elements of mentoring - what to do, what NOT to do, where not to scratch, and the fact that you can trust your mentor to make the right choices. )
And yet you flamed 4 islands to the ground trying to kill me...
( Hey - I was a measly Blue! How could I know how important you were? )

aw that was so cute ^^ I loved it! You really talented and I think Gilmon rocks ^^ PLEEASE WRITE MORE! *puppy dog eyes*

Great story, I really like them.
Hurry up and write more.
You are a great writer.

Aw...

That was great, Dragon!

Really, this made my whole day!

Thank you! ^__^