Good stuff :-)

Ah, unconfusedness! The bliss of it all!

This piece is great. A bit confusing about what exactly happened to Neo, but still awesome. And don't worry about the wierdness. From one wierdo to another, wierd is cool!

Must..Not..gush...must...not...babble...
(Except to say briefly...OMG! that was good!)

Good job, hope you update your other one soon. Loved this side story!