Interesting. I like stories like these- where we see inside the character's minds. Wonderful description as well, you paint vivid images that would fit right into the movie. Great job!

Great characterization and insight.

Wow...that was great! It seemed very much in character : )

I want to read more. You did so well with this. The butcher is my favorite character, and I just want to see some justice for him. He didn't get much in the movie. Please write more.