I'm going to hope, or pray, thst you update this very sweet awesome story. I really and genuinely love the way you write; the way how you describe the scenes perfectly.

I hope that whatever problem or hinderance you have, I hope you overcome it and kick their asses xD

Take care :)

I don't think it's at all fair of you to start such an insightful, wonderful story and then leave us all hanging on a pivotal plot point. Your story is amazing! A perfect blending of 'The Blue Sword' with the Kenshin Universe. I know that things must be busy for you, especially with so much on your plate judging from your Author's Note, But please, please, PLEASE find it in your heart to bring this story out of retirement and finish it. You owe it to yourself, your characters, and us, the poor readers who are waiting with baited breath to see what happens next.

P.S. I could say this about all of your discontinued stories, by the way. But I'm a die-hard Robin McKinley fan, so the loss of this story really resonates with me. Please? _

God this is one of my fav stories! I remember reading it yrs ago and couldn't find it for so long. I hope kenshin and kaoru will find the happiness within each other. :)

Oooh, very interesting! Reminds me a lot of Little One by Ravyn, which you have in your favs :)

Obviously there are similarities, but there are some rather delightful differences. The best one being the fact about being nomads and Kenshin throwing Kaoru out into the snow.

She's treated as a healthy capable human being right off the bat, instead of in Little One, where no one expects her to do anything at all.

Looking through the rest of your favs, there are many I've read and equally liked. I think I'll be plundering through that list shortly after reading the rest of your library.

I'm sad to see that it has been discontinued, but still very happy that you left it online and I was able to read it.

Thank you for the story!

I remember when my little brother couldn't get past "the orange juice part" I finally got him to read The Blue Sword though, and he was glad he read it. The Blue Sword was exactly what came to mind when I started to read this story, and seeing as how I adore that book, I have no objections.

this is an awesome story

I'm been enjoying this a lot. I'm really happy to see a story in which Tomoe and Kaoru are friends and have a cordial relationship. I'm glad it's not an acrimonious one with them fighting over Kenshin. I've gotten really sick of those stories. Thanks for writing! Please do continue this story!

fnally kenshin! please update soon! (:

not a bad spot to leave off as far as chapters go but i'd really like to know what comes next so please update ;-)

I love this story. i like the dream woman she's very... apropriate. her role is awesome. i like how powerful you made Kaoru. she roxs _ please update

Good plot and good story.

Really looking forwards to your next chapter. Hope u update soon

Ganbarre

I love your story,

I read about your goings on in the story, and if it helps any, I'm sorry for all the trouble that you are going through.

On a brighter note, you have me completly inthralled in your story and I am counting the hours untill an update comes.

Yours Truly,

Viridis

:)

On d bright side at least Enshi n Tomoe do genuinely care 4 her as do every1 from Hisen...i think that d basards r gonna be in 4 hell when Kenshin goes 2 their meeting...i can't wait...update! I'm so happy abt d way this is turning out 2 be...

Ah! I understand that this is discontinued for now, but it is SO good! Please PLEASE continue when you have the chance!

Why did you decide to discontinu this story I know I'm just a worthless reader but I'm mostlikely not the only one who loved this story.