i had finished the story before classes resumed...great idea of plot and story...well portrayed and flawless...

well, so far has been the greatest fanfic ive ever read...one of the first...ill be glad for a sequel...

wow. i finally finished this story on my b-day (valentines day)and i got to day this is one of the best stories i've read. like the best ever. saying that you did a good job would be an understatement. :)

I must say, you are an AMAZING writer...An amazing writer of romance stories...Unfortunately, I don't much like romance. Don't get me wrong, you really are that good. It's just that, eventually, too much mushy stuff makes me want to stop (I'm a guy, after all). In other words, your writing is very, very good; it's just not for me.

Hello! I just read your story and I would like to say: Congratulations! It's a wonderful story, very fascinating with all the suspens of this story, very good written so everything can be read and understand easily. The characters stick very well to the true nature of the show and the others characters (the ennemies, the elders, Yoh, etc) are very interesting. I really love this story and particularly the fact that you have thought to Kurama and Botan like soul mates. Never in the others stories, I've read this and really, it was an excellent idea because we can really see how much they care, they love each other. Besides you also talk of the other couples and so we can see how much each characters care and love also for each other. Really I love it. I could talk of this story for hours but I wouldn't do because my english is not very good so it'll take very long before I can writting correct sentences. However, the only tiny little thing that bother me, it's the epilogue: perhaps it's a little short, I would have liked to know what's happen to the other (Yoh, Koenma, etc) or perhaps say a little more about the future of everyone (like the wedding day of Kurama and Botan, for example, what they are doing in work, etc). But never mind, it doesn't matter because all the rest is very good.
Again I want to say "good work" and "thank you" for the wonderful times in reading this. It will be hard to find others stories as excellent as yours.
So good bye and keep writting stories because I think that you've a great skill in writting.

P.S: I hope that I don't make too many errors in my engligh and you can read me. So if not the case I apologize.

See you later, dela490, a big fan of Kurama and Botan. So long live for this couple! In fact, I just read your personnal homepage and I just realise that I read your others stories and that I also love them and on the contrary of some people who think you're a "sex crazed loser", I don't think like them even for your story "A matter of lust". After all, if they don't like so don't read it.

i just stared reading you story and its awsome! i can't wait to see what happens next ^_^ its very well written and i can't wait to read the rest of teh chapters ^_^

xP

In one of your later stories, Kurama has a bright red car. xD

I loved the story. It was long and suspensful but it was really great. They plot was awesome. I love your writing style. The characters personalities matched them perfectly and I know how hard it is to achieve this. Through out the whole story I was on the edge of my seat. I couldn't tear my eyes away. This has got to be one of the best fanfics that I have ever read. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Great chapter! I hope Botan can find a loophole soon. And I really like Yusuke in this too. He's awesome, and Hiei is even descent enough for me to enjoy too (normally I don't like him). Anyway, awesome story. KuramaxBotan! ^_^

Sorry I haven't read this in a while. But it's still as awesome as ever! I love your work. Nicely done! ^_^

A: hey u bastard! what peice of sh*t are u crapping about?

B: what makes you think people will read this douched up sh*t?

A: *smirk* u...don't really believe that those reviews r true, do u?

B: well, fu*ktard, face the truth! this is just a piece of crap!!

A: totally agree! and Mr. (James) Fu*cker, next time try something else! Something EXCITING! not just a crapping blah.

B:or at least try to write something that you can actually call a 'story'

A very good chapter! Some very sweet fluff in there, and some good action. It's so sad to see Kurama and Botan separate again, but I'm sure they'll end up together soon. And I hope everyone doesn't end up hating Koenma. I think he's just trying to protect Botan. A very ugly situation indeed. Well, I must keep reading. Again, good job!

Aww such nice fluff! Very nicely done. I can't wait for next chapter. It sounds so good!

Good chapter! So sad though! Botan confessed but Kurama turned her down. It was so heartbreaking. I just wish they'd give in to their feelings already! Well I can't wait to keep reading! ^_^

Very good chapter! I can't wait to keep reading! I hope Kurama and Botan confess soon! XD I guess the only way to know is to keep reading. Anyway, love the story! ^_^