Really good but i like the second one better. But i am dark and weird.

I love them both! Great job!

I love it. Morbid indeed. :) I'm going to put that on my pants, if you don't mind. (I have a pair of pants that I adorn with all my favorite sayings, poems, lyrics, and occasionally a touching or elaborately written portion of a book. And pictures too.) I also like how you included his mother's version also. It makes Remus's one so much more pained, rather than if you simply presented it alone. Excellent

I think that this poem is simply stunning! I can just see Remus' mother singing to him, and the bitter, twisted version is incredibly haunting in its simplicity. It really captures Remus' emotions. Beautiful!

This was really beautiful and sad! *snif* Poor lill' Remus...

(hm, not that I should be talking, after all the horrible things I do to him in my ficts... ;))

Oh, very very sad, nicely twisted. I feel wicked bad for Remus...

Oh! Poor Remus! He is one of my favorite characters, and I think that the way you portray him in your poems is magnificent! Bravo!
Ciao for now!

Poor Remus!

oh my gosh, you know how to write!! I could never do things like this. You write things filled with passion. I like and really enjoy your writing!!

Beutiful! God, do i love your poetry! write more poetry! please!! *puppy eyes* stil, this was a great poem about remus' lullaby. i love how you go from one description to a totally diff. one! from good...to bad in this poem at least.

twisted but really good. i can also see how remus see's it that way... =)

Oh, I like that! It's more intense than the Remus you see in the books, but I think that's something like what we would see if we went further into his mind. Very cool. I like the contrast. And thank you for the review on my fic about Petunia. ^_^

Nice reversal. A little over emphasised, but that's just my taste. I think you did a nice job. And I really like the idea of every childhood mesage getting twisted.

Ohh! It makes u think of all the terrible things that Remus must have thought of (and gone through) when it happened *shudders*, the poor child! :(
Have u written anything about that time in Remus life? When will u post your Remus-stories?

Eizoku-

*shudders* Remus's Morbid Lullaby is - hmm - I can't think of the right word. I'd say it is very unique.

Did you make those up yourself?

Wowwzies, the two contrast a lot, but I'm
guessing it is meant to be that way?

I think Remus' Lullaby is a bit too-good-too-be-true, but i still like it a lot.

Caitlyn