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gone119
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
Great story!
GoggleheadEXE
2009-12-04 . chapter 3
Nice details...I can see these two aniem coexisting in the same world easily.
Kithrin
2009-12-03 . chapter 9
I like it, please continue.
Wrin
2009-09-01 . chapter 9
Things kind of took a dive readability-wise in this chapter. The whole sister/grandmother thing is really confusing in its lack of detail, and there were some spelling mistakes as well. Add that to the whole iinazuke and "we want you in the galaxy police" thing and I think every thing is just changing too quickly for the reader to easily follow.
scifinut64
2009-06-12 . chapter 9
very good story, looking forward to more.
Unununium
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
Smashing story so far, although I feel very disturbed that every time I look at the title, I can't help but think of a Ranma/Ladle lady matchup entitled 'The Warrior and the Pacemaker' Which is rather disturbing.
Schwarzdrache
2008-12-14 . chapter 9
I join the others in the clamoring for... Update!

Really, I like it so far, well written and well put together, could use some more detail in a few places, but the loose structure allows the mind to shape the scenes more readily. Keep up the good writing, and remember to feed your muse, lest it go on hunger strike. :)
slimjim27
2008-09-24 . chapter 9
great story man, please update soon!!
Rose1948
2008-08-19 . chapter 9
Nice to see you back! Another good chapter that leaves me panting for more!
aznblackhowling
2008-08-17 . chapter 9
Great chapter. I look forward to your next chapter and how the resuce of Mizuho will work out. Along with how you will integrate Please Teacher with Ranma 1/2 and Tenchi.
Dumbledork
2008-08-16 . chapter 9
Excellent new chapter. And I like the idea of Ranma joining the Galaxy Police. Hasn't been done before, I think.
Sean Malloy-1
2008-08-13 . chapter 9
Good job on the updates on this, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
taxzombie
2008-08-07 . chapter 9
Always pleased to see an addition to this tale. Especially enjoyed the way this chapter played out. It leaves a vaste number of avenues to choose from for future chapters.

Thank you for posting it.
James Axelrad
2008-08-07 . chapter 9
its a great chapter, i really enjoyed reading it, cant wait to see what happens next.

kinda curious as to whats going on back in nerima though. also, why no one has gone to okayama to visit. specially with nodoka. i am curious as to why she wouldnt just up and go out there. not that im against anything you've written, i am simply curious.
Celestial Indigo
2008-08-06 . chapter 9
Yey, an update. Woho!

Nice conclusion to this chapter. With the offer of Ranma becoming a GP Officer with Kasumi by his side. I wonder if he'll have to go through the Nano-enhancement too. Or at least Kasumi so she'll be closer to Ranma's level and Mortal-decay rate.

I was a little disappointed at the lack of Ryo-okhi parts in this. I miss the little tyke. Make sure she has more in the next one too. Maybe bring in Fuku too.

As for the next chapter...make the GF pay. Have Washu make a VR simulation of Ranma's childhood...only to make them watch it over and over again. That will put them in their place...right?

Lookin' forward to your next chapter.
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