Hee hee, I loved this! And the story before! Very entertaining; I couldn't stop giggling. ^^ Will you write a sequal to this eventually?

^chuckles^ Ah, the return of the ever-annoying Mary Sue. You do make an amusing parody of such characters, though. :3
And they do have a nasty habit of not dieing, don't they? ^chuckles again^

I love these stories.
Taking the fanfiction fauxpah's and turning them into a fantastic storyline with great fight scenes and mass hilarity.
^-^
*hugs*
AWESOME!

Oh my lands, I'm crying with laughter. THANK YOU for taking the mickey out of MarySues. Seriously, drive the stinkin' Sues into the SEA!

Haystack

Hai. Good fic! I like it, I like it lots. You have no idea how many times I've had to read a Mary Sue... or how many times I've wanted to make an anti-badfic like this! It's my idea, you owe me a quarter! No, no really.

Just so you know, at the bottom of the page you have the links back to your website, except they aren't links. I take it you just copy-pasted the story from insecticon.com to fanfiction.net? (I dunno how it works, I'm too young to have an account.) Anywho, the links are down there and unfunctional. Soo... might wanna do something about that. Heh.

~AD
"I am APOCALYPTIC DOOM!!"
"Apocta/wazzit/??"
"Yes... Apoctawazzit DOOM."

Hmm. Once again, amazingly well written. I just can't believe you can make BloodKatt so amazingly bland and Mary-Sueish without subconciously dragging the rest of the characters down with her. That takes expertise I don't have. You just make it look so easy! Great sequel, and once more, hats off to you!

~ckret2

Excellent! This just gets better every time I read it... The other reviews have pretty much covered the main points, so I'll simply say that this was hugely enjoyable and that I'm glad I've finally gotten around to adding my review!
A sequel... PLEASE!

I think I've said this before, but, goddamn, you're good. I've never really considered the Insecticons all that interesting until I came across your site, and now I'm starting to see the cyberentophiliac light; moreover, you're literate, well-rounded (I don't think I know anyone else who mixes Transformers and Lovecraft) and wickedly funny. And you write Starscream entirely too well.
This particular story is, I think, one of your best. "Deus Ex Machina" was delightful, but you take the unwilling self-insertion further here with your Predabee body, and I really enjoyed the descriptions of how difficult it was to get accustomed to the body in its two modes, and to use it. No one ever touches on that in other SI fics--they all assume that they'll be perfectly able to use their new alien bodies just fine with no practice. One cookie for the delightful MarySue satire, and one really big cookie for Wayward the Predabee.
Grr. I'm gonna go back and make up a bunch more nasty, sarcastic, pointy fancharacters now. I'm inspired.

I really liked both of your fics! Ya gotta love 'em! ^_^ Will their be a sequel?

Your attempts to make a "bad fic" have failed miserably, I'm afraid. This is delightfully funny! You've zinged the stereotypers, the 'serts, the writers who jump around detail, add charries with modified paint jobs and who ignore continuity (we even have Dinobot 2!). And you've done it all in a mature and witty fashion. Lesser writers would scream out their frustration in capital letters, but you showed how silly these faults through detail and description.
I'm confused about Waspinator though, - was the idea to abandon Terrorsaur an OOC moment caused by your Mary-Sue presence? Or was his simple thought process caused by your sterotyping influence.
To summerize, this was a dynamite fic. The narration battle scene made me think of The Matrix and trying to "control the code". Clever and funny.

A sequel! I demand a sequel! -__^; Great fic! Oddly enough, Wayward seemed not-so-Mary-Sue. I loved it! Evil BloodKatt! DIE!! ^_^ Awesomeness!!

BWHAHAH! I love this fic since I first read it in your site, but I`m too lousy with sending emails or replying to them so... :P

Hopefuly you posted it here, we need more good quality fics on this site ;)

*is happy*

YAY!