 bgreenwivy 2008-11-29 . chapter 1That was cute and sad but still wonderful. |
 ladymetachronism 2006-06-12 . chapter 1=]
I liked this very, very much. Your writing style took a moment to get used to- not often do people write in present-tense- but the story was lovely. Every bit was believable, and I really felt that you portrayed the characters of Draco and Neville especially truthfully. Bravo! |
 Berylia-Crystalia 2005-07-20 . chapter 1I just want to cry. Poor Neville, what a terrible life to have...
That was a touching story. |
 blackshift 2005-05-25 . chapter 1that was cute, I love it =) |
 Snozzle 2005-02-19 . chapter 1Aww bless him! That was just simply adorable. |
 slave2spike4eva'N'eva 2004-08-01 . chapter 1 hey, couldn't be assed logging in lol ;) I like this story, aw, poor neville, malfoy's such a menaie :@ but as he's a cutie I'll let him off heheh, carry on wiv this it has potential x |
 Andromeda Black 2004-06-13 . chapter 1 AW!Such sweetness.I always knew he had it in him!GO NEVILLE!!I really would like to see you write more,'cause it's really sweet.
TTFN
Ta Ta For Now |
 beware of trips 2003-08-08 . chapter 1This fic is so wonderful. Neville was always my favorite character. After book 5 I love him twice as much. I always knew there would be something more to him then we know.
Hahahaha, Malfoy deserved that. |
 CrinkleCutRuffles 2003-08-04 . chapter 1*huggles Neville*
Aw, that's so...well sweet is the only word I'm afraid! d:
I like what JK did with Neville in OOtP, I had a feeling there was more to him than we realised.
Nice one-shot, I enjoyed, even though it's sad. |
 annie76 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Aw, the hospital scene was the thing that got to me the most in the book. I'm not saying the death didn't affect me, but... poor Nev, that scene was just breaking my heart. I really like the way you've dramatised his feelings in this fic. Your writing's really good. |
 Colleen and Fish (the fish) 2003-07-17 . chapter 1 You're back! *does the happy monkey dance of joy*
Was a very sweet/sad/funny story... (funny because I always enjoy Draco being physically harmed ^_^)
Gum wrappers make me all sniffly now. I bet you anything JK's going to show Neville with a box of wrappers in the next book ;) |
 ann_tagonist 2003-07-10 . chapter 1 go nev! was a short but sweet story, good going tyde! (sorry couldn't resist the pun)
i thought the box was going to be something that ginny had given him at first, that will teach me for trying to guess the plot.
glad to see ur back at it, since my biography will boring i say write a weasly twin story!! |
 The Ingenue's Shadow 2003-07-08 . chapter 1Aw, this is really sweet! You're such a good writer . . . if i wasn't severely caffinated, i'd probably cry or something. i really love this one . . . it's really sweet. when i read the book i remember thinking about the wrappers . . . the only criticism i have is that i would have liked to see some sort of reaction besides shock from malfoy. good luck; keep it up! |