 EmptyWord 2007-07-18 . chapter 1Hah! As much as Snape can admit aloud to his feelings, you have managed it here.
"I must have some, at least, to have put up with you for this long" - I love that Snape is fascinated with this comment and equates it to what a lover would speak to his beloved. Which, really, isn't that far-fetched and makes one wonder as well. After all, Snape reads subtleties like no one else can, and that you also illustrate very clearly when you describe him watching, deciphering, not missing anything.
A fitting song. I can see where the inspiration comes from. |
 Agnus Dei 2004-08-29 . chapter 1 So sweet, |
 J.C. 2003-10-30 . chapter 1 That was really good! I don't suppose you wrote a sequel, or would be willing to write one? But I just have to say again that I *really liked it. I'll be checking out your other works. I hope I'm not ahead of myself in thinking that you have more, but this one was so good, how could you not? Thanks for writing! |
 Saevus Nicholas 2003-10-22 . chapter 1 That was really... really beautiful. I really don't know how to articulate a response to that. That was actually quite cute, in a way entirely different from the usual stupid and pretentious fluff. It was very original. (I usually don't find things 'cute'. I usually find them more… 'Nauseating', you could say. You honestly have my instant utmost respect.)
Your "Hands Clean" was what originally made me interested in the Harry/Severus ship- that story; in particular, I thought to be very sweet despite its dark overriding concept. (I believe that I read it about the time that it came out, but looking through the reviews it appears that for some strange reason I didn't review it. So really this is kind of a double review...).
You have a very interesting imagination, very unique concepts, and seem quite adept at avoiding clichés in your stories. You tie music into your stories without making it seem too out of place- and rather than sprinkle the lyrics nonsensically throughout your story, you had made them an addendum to the story more as an interesting tidbit that over pretentious nonsense.
I probably sound like an idiotic prat, but in any case, I greatly enjoyed this (especially Snape’s ending retort) and sincerely hope that you succeed in you’re future writing endeavours (whatever they may be) - You certainly have the talent and imagination to do so.
I think I’m going to shut up now before I make a further imbecile of myself.
Good luck and well wishes,
Saevus the Unknown Cyrux |
 SEP 2003-07-15 . chapter 1I really liked this fic! Keep ur the great writing!
Happy writing,
-SEP |
 evelia 2003-07-13 . chapter 1That was simply superb, Farseeker. It shall go to my favorite stories list, for it was written with grace and was beautiful in more than one way. Fantastic job, I love it.
-evelia |
 kittylover16 2003-07-11 . chapter 1Great job! I love the ending! Keep up the great work! |
 neva 2003-07-11 . chapter 1 ah, that was just beautiful. |
 Irihi Safaia 2003-07-10 . chapter 1*applauds wildly* |
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