please finish your story !

Hey!

This is probably the most delayed review I have ever given in my entire life...well, at least while I've been in fanfiction. ^_^ I was just looking through my favorites today, and I saw a chapter that I didn't review! =*( I'm so sorry! But I'm here now, reviewing your story, like a good little reviewer. ^^

Anyway, great chapter, as are all your others. Oh, and I loved wishing people happy birthdays, especially when one of my friends invites me to go to dinner with them for their birthday. Me and whoever else was invited always fake leaving to use the bathroom, and then tell the waiter guy that its someones birthday at table 5. ^^ Lol! I always get smacked for it though, every time...

You left an evil cliffy at the end! I wanna know what happens next! I read your profile, and I see that it has been postponed for the time being...but no matter. Writer's block is writer's block, can't help that. ^^ Take your time, by all means. O, and you're welcome for being a loyal reviewer! ^^ Hehe, yea, I read that part of your profile too. Well, until you next post!

Becka-)

Great story so far. I really enjoyed it. Tell me if the next chapter!
~Melissa~

Jessica: MARIK! MARIK LOOK SHE UPDATED!
Marik: Yes, quite exciting, sorry for not jumping with you
Jessica: *Grabs Marik by ear* Be nice! Now, tell her what you thought!
Marik: Simply loved it, update tomorrow perhaps
Jessica: YAYAYAYAYAY! Great chappie, great as always, keep up the good work! Oh, I added u to my msn! Talk to you then I guess,
Oh and update! YAY!
Marik: *Rollz eyez*-

HA! THAT'S GREAT! but anyways... I've got writers block. Got any ideas for me?

Wow. Now I know why you had that warning at the beginning. But nothing really happened, YET. I guess you'll end up needing the warning again for the next one as well, huh? I hope nothing bad happens to Lora! She's so sweet and cute. And the little Fluff scene between Yugi and Lora was Kawaii. As for Matt and Isiri, I swear those two are very thick headed. That scene on the boat reminds me of Naru and Kietaru from "Love Hina" They obviously both like each other, and care, but are too full of them selfs to admit it. well, thats all for me! Update as soon as possible because I am officialy dying to know whats going to happen to everyone! Till then, it's been a blast.
::KIA:: Minokoe, Signing Off~!

Hi...guess who? lol...I know i reviewed ur last chapter, but i have to say this: Please update?? Plz?? Me and Marik miss ya lol!
Marik: Its true...
Jessica: So anyways...update real soons k...oh and also, when u get this...if u want, u dont have to lol, but add me 2 ur msn...it be fun 2 talk to ya, i wud add u...but i dun kno if ya want me to...oh wells if ya dont...
Anyways, hurry and update!

HEY!! Sry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've been majorly busy!! Anyways, I really liked this chapter!! Dude, it was totaly awsome! I'm glade everyone's back together again! Desert Rose, huh? Well, I'll just have 2 check it out. Sounds pretty good!! So I think I shall review it right now!! TTYL, Lvu Ya Girl, BI!! ^.~
::KIA::

Jessica: This is the happiest day of my life!

Marik: Why?

Jessica: SHE UPDATED! Isnt this excitting? and it was such a great chapter! PLEASE UPDATE NOW!

Marik: NOt this again...

Jessica: MARIK MAKE HER UPDATE!

Marik: NEVER UPDATE! im tired of her harrasing me!

Jesica: ILL STOP! JUST TAKE IT BACK!

Marik: Update soon!

JEssica: YAY! This was a great chapter, i'm glad you updated, also i updated too! Were like twins now!

MarikL Christ

Jessica: LOL! Anyways see ya when you update~!

Kool chappie! ^_^ srry for the delay of the review..i had to do...other things. yea. thats it.

happy b-day to Lora! even tho i dont even noe u, i luv wishin ppl happy birthdays! ^0^ and back to the author, u've got another fic? i didnt noe that..*slaps forehead*

anyway, continue soon! funny chapter in sum parts, i personally liked it.

Becka-) ^_~

good chappie!

Mariks-girl1: UPDATE NOW I SAY! DO IT!
* Waits a few seconds * MARIK SHE WONT UPDATE!

MArik: For the love of god women update! I can't take her any more!

MAriks-girl1: Tank you! * Hugs Marik * Great story so far... * Waits a few more seconds * MArik she still hasn't updated!

MArik: She will soon, i promise! * Looks at ISIRI and mouths to her * Please update, if ot for her then for me...

MAriks-girl1: MArik! What did you just tell her? ANyways love your story!! PLz update soon...
* Waits a few minutes * MARIK! SHE WON"T UPDATE! TELL HER TO UPDA-

Marik: Okay, its bedtime for you missy!! sorry about her...great story by the way!

very good!

Hiya! ^_^

anywayz...good chappie, i rlly liked it!
and another cliffhanger! i HATE those, but o well, i gess i gotta deal with it...*tear*

cant wait ta see wat happens next! update soon!

Becka-) ^_~

ps im surprised this fic isnt gettin more reviews...i think its good. ^_^

i LUVED it lol! i thot it wuz kool and exciting and all the stuf like that u noe...yea...i suck at explaining myself.
anyway, i like long chapters, it just gives me more of an excuse to stay on the computer longer lol!
also, i like the idea of the kiss, its really original. ^_^
also, i 4got to tell u in my last review, but i thot it wuz really funny in the 9th chapter when bakura wuz chasing rhea.
she saluted to him b4 jumping off the roof, i thot that wuz really funny, dont ask lol.
this is kinda on the long side, but o well...
o yea, skool's started 4 me 2...9th grade teachers suck man...anyway, continue and plz update when u got tha time! Luv ya,

Becka-) ^_~

ps i usually dont rite long reviews, but i esp. like this fic lol ^0^