This was absolutely fantastic. I'm a huge fan of the Ryanverse and SG-1, and seeing POTUS Ryan lay some verbal smackdown like that, just like in the books, was fantastic. You really got the characters to fit. Bloody good work, as Alistair Stanley would say...on to the sequel.

This was a nice story, definitely in th top 10%. The characters acted the way that they do in canon, which is much better than some other fics I have read. Overall, I would suggest this story to a friend.

That was pretty cool.

Nice, liked it! :)

I like this XO with the Jack Ryan characters. Have not read the books, but enjoy the xo very much!

Nice job, and thanks for crossing over Stargate with the Tom Clancy books I acualy read.

Sic Semper Tyrannus

Carry on.

Great story,

keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.

Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

good, byes

I like the story, but you may want to do a little more research before you write about books/films that were so popular. I've read Rainbow Six and seen Clear and Present Danger several times and some of your facts are false. Clark was never in the military and the op he and Chavez ran in Clear and Present Danger was in Bogota, Columbia, not Panama. And I don't think it's possible to get to the rank of General from Petty Officer, seeing as they are two ranks on opposite ends of two different branches of the military (there is no General rank in the Navy, if you're saying that Clark was in the Navy).

Short story but nice way of putting them together.

I was just notified about this fic by C2 list. I'm so glad i took a chance! Here I was thinking that not many people crossed the worlds of Ryan and the SGC (I've actually got one going myself). You did a wonderful job of bringing the worlds in and a nice solution you came up with for several issues. Good job!

I liked the story; Clancy is one of my favorite authors, and SG-1 one of my favorite shows. One thing though, and I'm sure others have pointed this out, but Clark and Chavez are not “real” officers, they have honorary rank, but are not members of the Army or any other uniformed service.

yes sequel is a good thing! please!

Great story loved the way all the characters worked,and as a previous reviewer said saw a few spelling changes...but like you said, you're a writer, not a speller.And YOU are most definitely a good writer.Please write a sequel

oh, I like, I really really like!