Ooh, good...

Apperantly fanfiction.net is haveing some problems which sucks because I can't read the rest of your story. But from what I read it is very good, the Kei and Yuri are a bit OOC but its not a problem, I look foward to reading the rest whenever FF.net fixes itself.

nice...really nice...

... Uh...cool!!

Wow this is a very well written story.Keep up the good work.