Random question, did I spot a Doctor Who reference in there?

woww so cutee i love marty and merril! i lovee it! its awsomee ]

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What ever happened to punctuation? Your narrative sentences were all run-ons.

hey

please continue this chap. I'm interssted. please

it's not bad just that there's a lot of mistakes and i couldn't understand the story because of them.

wow that was so cute loved it

I really like this story keep going with it

That was a great idea but you should really reread the two chapters and do some editing. I know when I reread my own work, I kick myself for not noticing the mistakes. The constant use of "well" instead of "will" was somewhat irritating. Otherwise, it was a very good story and, with a few tweaking, it could be great.

*claps* This is great!

Omigod! That was awesome! Pleez write more soon!

This is great! I love Marty! And I was really hoping that they would get those two together in season 2. Alas there is no season 2. Well great fic! Can't wait to read more!