|Reviews for Fate and the innocent|
| Abby 10/14/10 . chapter 1
Random question, did I spot a Doctor Who reference in there?
| spacebound1317 7/6/08 . chapter 2
woww so cutee i love marty and merril! i lovee it! its awsomee ]
| Kitty 3/7/06 . chapter 1
What ever happened to punctuation? Your narrative sentences were all run-ons.
| Tunder28 1/24/06 . chapter 2
please continue this chap. I'm interssted. please
| Yasmin 8/25/05 . chapter 1
it's not bad just that there's a lot of mistakes and i couldn't understand the story because of them.
| baby12 7/27/05 . chapter 2
wow that was so cute loved it
| Sweet 7/7/05 . chapter 2
I really like this story keep going with it
| VenomVampire 1/20/04 . chapter 2
That was a great idea but you should really reread the two chapters and do some editing. I know when I reread my own work, I kick myself for not noticing the mistakes. The constant use of "well" instead of "will" was somewhat irritating. Otherwise, it was a very good story and, with a few tweaking, it could be great.
| Silver Mirror 8/11/03 . chapter 2
*claps* This is great!
| DarkFate1 7/15/03 . chapter 1
Omigod! That was awesome! Pleez write more soon!
| Vanima Nwalmaer 7/14/03 . chapter 1
This is great! I love Marty! And I was really hoping that they would get those two together in season 2. Alas there is no season 2. Well great fic! Can't wait to read more!