hey i know that you wrote this story a really long time ago, but i just want to say that i really love it a lot... i hope that i did not end here... but oh well i hope that you continue it some time i will be atentive and waiting for it
Dani

Wow. I mean, wow! Wonderful fic, one of my all time favourites! I absolutely LOVE your characterisation of Hiko. I love the plot, the suspense, the interactions and the beautiful language! Please try to update it again. I'm a little saddened to see that the last time you've done so was last August.

Next chapter? Hope you can finish this fic.

This is an interesting story to say the least. When you put the genre Action in, you really live up to your promise on the action. Your Englis is good enough that it doesn't confuse me to hell what with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, although there were a few here and there. The one thing that constantly shoots my head into spirals of confusion is what you are trying to imply from time to time. You seem to be going around in riddles and the conversations are rarely understood by my somewhat normally capable mind. I really do not understand all most of what is going on, although I get the picture that there is some kind of "Blue stone" that is somehow connected with a freak curse and Hiko's lover. I hope that I am at least correct in that department. Please try to change your writing style just a thad bit when explaining the situations. It is also a bit unnerving trying to differ thought from actual explaination. Best of luck to you with future chapters and I hope I have not caused offence with what this review.

Agony... mean cliffie ! I look foward to the next chapter. And, what the hell is Kenshin doing that he doesn't "talk" honestly with Kaoru... Please don't let the new Puppet issue be an excuse for him to go on another justice rampage and delay the Kaoru ISSUE ! Well, that's just a thought.
bye bye

AH! NO! Don't stop!

*cough cough*

Anyways, could you please update soon? PLEASE?!

I really like this so far. I found the chapter one version and I was very happy to see that it was reposted with more. Please don't let it stop here. Looking forward to the next installment!

I know that the //thought quotes// are not working...nor are the page break-y things. I am trying to suss it out. Thank you for your observation...It's there in the origional work, I've not figured out how to fix it.

I must say that I am impressed. Forgive me, but I lack the words to describe how exquisite this peice of work is.

Much niftiness! *eats popcorn* Don't take too long to update, ne?

Suggestion: Put some more space between your POV changes, it's less confusing. That's about it. ^^

I really like this story. [It's 2 am and my brain has melted.]
I completely like that Hiko's in this story, and think you characterized him very nicely.
*huggles* I hope you get the chance to update soon!
*gives cookies*

Ah, it's good to have a story that focuses somewhat on all those nasty emotions floating around after Enishi. ^^ Your characterisation is wonderful, by the way, and I'm adding you to my favourites to see what happens next!

The only criticism I could give is that some of your longer paragraphs get confusing. It's sometimes good to separate different viewpoints into different sections, but it's not too hard to follow.

Ah... there aren't enough good non au kenshin fics out there! I cant wait to see what happens! :)

Hey cool fic. This is perhaps the fourth time I'll read this fic and still waiting for an update. Hopefully your post chapter two soon. Take care. Laters

This is great!! It takes a very good writer to made a story both toching and humorous.