 KiraDN 2004-04-16 . chapter 2Well... That was different.
What the heck? The ending was confusing.
But whatever, I think's it's cool! |
 dogbertcarroll 2003-07-11 . chapter 1LOL. What a long strange fic it's been. *grin* |
 Lord Rance 2003-07-11 . chapter 1 ...
You know what, I wasn't really that surprised when Tofu turned out to be Ranma. For some reason, it kinda feels right somehow.
Feh.
Don't mind me. Just commenting. By the way, do a series about it. The plot sounds real good after all.
^_^ |
 DigiSim 2003-07-11 . chapter 1Because of the review from neko_ranma, I realized that I had forgotten to mention that the item that Tofu Ranma had was the NanBan Mirror. I've since fixed this error. Also, Cologne isn't younger physically because I made Mousse attracted to older women, very older. He's also been seeing the ladle lady on the side. *evil grin* Just so you know, the whole mirror was split down the middle, not just the glass part. When the Onos found both Ranmas, first the girl one, then the boy one, they each had a half of the mirror. |
 neko_ranma 2003-07-10 . chapter 1 umm... HELLO!! What about all the times that Ranma and Tofu were seen together? Wait... wait... don't tell me... Ranma "magically" knew a way to split himself into. come on gimme a break |
 Kolock 2003-07-10 . chapter 1Very interesting Fic. I have to say I almost didnt see that coming till you had Tofu say he had amnesia. It fills in all the plot holes and has a nice ending to it. Reminds me of "Where I came from" by Cloud dreamer
http://w.geocities.com/cloud_dreamer20/Where-I-Came-From.htm
Thats a story kinda like this one.
All in all you did a good job, but the Mouse + Cologne link up is just wrong unless she had something to make her young again.
Very interesting couple matchups. :P
Well good fic. I look forward to future writings by you. |
 Adyen 2003-07-10 . chapter 1 *choak* That's surprising... |
 TerraEpon 2003-07-10 . chapter 1And here I thought this would be a serious fic...
-Joshua |