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| Indigo Spirit 2005-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet I like it. |
| Eden 2005-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the story...its good so far. Please finish I want to see what happens to Brock and Jesse. |
| THE RAICHU! 2004-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewhoo-ho! Really nice pairing ;-) HAHA. Are you ever going to write more? |
| heh 2004-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseM... Potstickers... I like your fic! |
| Musogato 2004-02-02 ch 1, | abuseo, interesting fic! And somehow cute too. ^-^ Please continue it when you got time! =) |
| Erin Ellis 2003-12-02 ch 1, | abuseooh.. yay for Brock fics! Interesting setup, I'd be interested in seeing where you go with this if you ever choose to continue... Cool stuff! |
| Arrow 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuse"I'll give you a Scooby snack!" lol! Brock's always thinking of something. James is just too funny. "and my pants look fabulous, thank you very much." Arbok seemed dazed as it came out of the pokeball, not having heard its name beforehand. Y'know I never thought about it before, but that's probablly a really logical explination as to why they obnoxiously yell out the names all the time. Miraculaously I knew what Ash was saying too *sigh* "retard child" XD LOL! Yes that defintally describes him perfectly. I don't want to die without tasting Brock's cooking either! Ash and Misty are such ingrates! Roni! I'm so glad I randomly checked your author page! This was great and it would be very useful for you to finish this! And anything else you have stored up... I was gone for a while too and I didn't like the state of pokemon section either... it scared me. But anyway welcome back! |
| Neko Kate-chan 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWRITE MORE! and i think you should think about putting up all the different parts as different chapters... |
| Spruceton Spook 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Is it--is it really YOU? Ah! ^_^ OMG, you have no idea how happy I was to see that you put a new story up! I missed having you around here so much! And I've totally been dying to read a good Brock story lately, no fooling. And also one about Ash getting allergic, heehee. Well, no, it's not that amazing of a coincidence, I'm kidding around. :P But I did want a good Brock story! There aren't many. I should stop rambling and review--wow, I've never seen a Brock/Jessie fic before. *_* As weird as it sounds, reading this made it seem less and less weird. I guess it's because Brock is such a sweetheart. ^^ It's so nice of him to help her out in her time of need, despite everything. And I suppose it also beats watching Ash scratch himself to death, LOL. Oh, please do continue this! It was so funny, and it was like old times again, and I LOVED it! ^__^ It's great to have you back! |
| Gryphon Turboclaw 2003-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'll give this much...you *did* get Brock and Misty in-character, so I have to give you points for that. |
| Spiffy 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAw~ Roni, you made me feel all warm and squooshy inside! But wow, you're a really great writer, you know that? You should because it's tro~ |