O.M.G! I hate you! thats a horrible cliffy! im going to cry *sniff, sniff, SOB!* oh my god your not nice! Make a sequel or something! and if you have then i feel like an idiot right now but if you havnt im going to restate the fact that i hate you!!

I love this, but I don't think you can keep up with the point system at the rate you are deducting points from the Lions den- Snape takes 50 and 60 points off every time he sees them. Thanks

cool story, I like it realy much!

Is there any possibility of a sequel to this story? I like this version of Severus and Harry, and would love the chance to look into their lives again. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

Dear Snivellus, I couldn't find your e-mail so I had to send this in a review. Sorry.

I just opened an archive called Potions and Snitches which is about Snape and Harry mentor fics and father/son fics, that sort of thing. I'm sending the link out to all the authors and readers who I think would be interested.

Here you go:

:)

Jan

I really really liked this story! Your a very talented writer!! Please, please write a sequel!

I've just started reading this story, and it seems to be well told and readable. But.. you need a beta to pick up those spelling and grammar errors! It feels sometimes as if your first language isn't English, but maybe it's just things that creep in while you're editing? But there's certainly nothing so far that a good beta/editor couldn't sort out - I'll keep reading, the good points outweigh far outweigh the few problems.

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Jan

ohh. that was so good! the last two chapters I really cried. It was so wonderful. Severus first words "Harry Potter"- WONDERFUL! Thank You, Thank You, Thank You! for the Happy End!

Liked your fic. And now it is over...
Aredhel

A well written story even if it's easy to tell that English isn't your first language. I'm sure your English will improve as you continue writing which will make the stories even better. I do want to express the thought that the end of the story was rather abrupt. Perhaps you might expand on it further; I'm sure there's a good deal that Snape would have to go through to recover from a half of a Dementor's kiss...

This was just so beautiful! *snif* Really, it was absolutely perfect! You rock!
Melwasul

I couldn't help but notice that you put 'sixth graders' in this chapter. As Hogwarts carries 'sixth year' students, I will assume that's who you meant. This is...interesting...but there are a few flaws. You might want to keep out the Americanisms (i.e., "Long time no see") British don't commonly use phrases like that, as they sound more formal (especially Severus). Though I am at a loss with the describing of Dumblesore's eye's "like an X-ray"...umm they're Wizards & Witches and I don't think that they even know what an X-ray is, but hey "whatever floats your boat". I'm sorry if this sounds like a flame, but I can assure you it is not, just a friendly little way of suggesting better ways of writing that might help with future chapters. I will however continue to read through it, but it is interesting and the plot is original.

~Severinus

Wonderful story! This was amazing. I enjoyed how you made good use of so many interesting characters in the Harry Potter universe and developed the alliance between Harry and Snape.

Very good characterizations and thank you so much for at least keeping Harry friends with Cho Chang. Despite how females tend to write her badly(including J.K Rowling who totally assasinated her in book 5) Cho Chang remains my favorite character and even if she's not Harry's lover, at least I like to see her stay friends with him.

Good job overall. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

whoa!
this chapter was totally great!
i feel like rereading it again and again!
snape and harry saving each other's lives, some death eater treatment, and a revenge on 'b-bellatrix l-lestrange'
GREAT!