 MegSamTim 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Sam- *Stares stupidly at screen* What happened? I can't ...I can't ...what? Oh boy ...I'm ...this is weird. And ...well ...Mikey likes it.
Meg- *beats self in head* GET IT OUT! GET IT OUT! GET IT OUT!
Tim- I kindof liked it! I'm curious though ...if I ** over London will I adopt a British accent? |
 blackflare13 2009-08-03 . chapter 1woohoo |
 The Carnivorous Muffin 2009-07-24 . chapter 1That was an increadibly troll, I'm feeding it |
 tohru-chan62442 2009-06-25 . chapter 1/watch?v=ZSdDgCsro4g&feature=channel_page |
 TheMr.Awesome 2009-04-24 . chapter 1best fanfic eva |
 ispt the sly 2009-01-06 . chapter 1 holy...**...** |
 BecauseI'mUnique 2008-12-28 . chapter 1This was BAD.
Funny but still bad. Keep writing |
 xxxbetterthanbellaxxx 2008-11-20 . chapter 1bwahahahaha!1
thiz ** suxz hella!! my storie is way bettre comparde to thizz!!
ur so stoopid!
xoxo Evelyn XD |
 hellking 2008-10-29 . chapter 1One check grammer
Two check spelling
three who's you dealer?
four that was funny as hell! |
 President of the Camel Club 2008-10-22 . chapter 1 I am president of the Double Bactrian Camel lovers club, where we protect the sanctity of the Bactrian Camel. I was hurt that you would make the camel out to be so evil. They are kind creatures, that is why we worship them. Clark Kent would have never defeated Thoragift God of the Bactrian Camels and his lover the Clawed Split Hoof Squee Baby Lover Happy Hippie Bactrian Camel of Venus and Mars, also know as Charlie. This is just not possible. In a story so filled with honest, wonderful spelling and grammer as well as a plot that makes more sense than Hemmingway in a thong, I have to say this was a gaping plot whole I just could not over look. Any man who flies around with a cape is obvious homosexual (look at that arse) he obviously gets some. Also Pet or Pete should be wearing a collar. As the president of the BDSM Club as well I have to say this was also appalling. Please fix this.
Also he didn't eat spegettios, this was disapointing.
We have a prayer I would like to share with you.
May the camel spit on your mother'
may the camel poop on your shoe
so you alway know
what ** is coming at you
god bless, |
 Kat 2008-07-20 . chapter 1 Um... I missed the point of this story (if there was one) and the big block of text didn't help. You need to make paragraphs. Also make sure to check your spelling and grammar. Sorry but this wasn't very good. |
 The Blundering Writer 2008-06-16 . chapter 1First off, I want whatever you were doing as you wrote this.
Second, why is this tragedy?
Third, please use proper English grammar and structure... |
 SpitFire89 2008-05-21 . chapter 1You need paragraphs. This makes my eyes burn. |
 chillian 2003-07-17 . chapter 1all i can really say is, "What the hell?" That was an entertaining little piece of drabble. Hee Hee.
~Chillian |
 The Die Hard 2003-07-11 . chapter 1His WHAT?
Whatever drugs you're doing, don't let the cops catch you... |