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MegSamTim
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Sam- *Stares stupidly at screen* What happened? I can't ...I can't ...what? Oh boy ...I'm ...this is weird. And ...well ...Mikey likes it.

Meg- *beats self in head* GET IT OUT! GET IT OUT! GET IT OUT!

Tim- I kindof liked it! I'm curious though ...if I ** over London will I adopt a British accent?
blackflare13
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
woohoo
The Carnivorous Muffin
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
That was an increadibly troll, I'm feeding it
tohru-chan62442
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
/watch?v=ZSdDgCsro4g&feature=channel_page
TheMr.Awesome
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
best fanfic eva
ispt the sly
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
holy...**...**
BecauseI'mUnique
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
This was BAD.
Funny but still bad. Keep writing
xxxbetterthanbellaxxx
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
bwahahahaha!1
thiz ** suxz hella!! my storie is way bettre comparde to thizz!!

ur so stoopid!
xoxo Evelyn XD
hellking
2008-10-29 . chapter 1
One check grammer
Two check spelling
three who's you dealer?
four that was funny as hell!
President of the Camel Club
2008-10-22 . chapter 1
I am president of the Double Bactrian Camel lovers club, where we protect the sanctity of the Bactrian Camel. I was hurt that you would make the camel out to be so evil. They are kind creatures, that is why we worship them. Clark Kent would have never defeated Thoragift God of the Bactrian Camels and his lover the Clawed Split Hoof Squee Baby Lover Happy Hippie Bactrian Camel of Venus and Mars, also know as Charlie. This is just not possible. In a story so filled with honest, wonderful spelling and grammer as well as a plot that makes more sense than Hemmingway in a thong, I have to say this was a gaping plot whole I just could not over look. Any man who flies around with a cape is obvious homosexual (look at that arse) he obviously gets some. Also Pet or Pete should be wearing a collar. As the president of the BDSM Club as well I have to say this was also appalling. Please fix this.

Also he didn't eat spegettios, this was disapointing.

We have a prayer I would like to share with you.

May the camel spit on your mother'
may the camel poop on your shoe
so you alway know
what ** is coming at you

god bless,
Kat
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
Um... I missed the point of this story (if there was one) and the big block of text didn't help. You need to make paragraphs. Also make sure to check your spelling and grammar. Sorry but this wasn't very good.
The Blundering Writer
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
First off, I want whatever you were doing as you wrote this.

Second, why is this tragedy?

Third, please use proper English grammar and structure...
SpitFire89
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
You need paragraphs. This makes my eyes burn.
chillian
2003-07-17 . chapter 1
all i can really say is, "What the hell?" That was an entertaining little piece of drabble. Hee Hee.

~Chillian
The Die Hard
2003-07-11 . chapter 1
His WHAT?


Whatever drugs you're doing, don't let the cops catch you...
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