wow this is a really cool story
is it finished?
or is there a sequel or something?

You've got me hooked Katie! How long does it take you to write all this? I must keep reading!

Excellent! I love Seamus.

Yay! We met Harry and Ron! I love Ron!

This just gets better and better! I wish it was me! Except for the parents dying thing of course. Favian gets to meet Harry Potter!

Wow! This is AWSOME! you have to continue! You must! You must! Don't make me keep posting and aggrivatineg you! I WILL do it! *Muhahahaha*

Oh, wow! I absolutely love your story! You've followed the fifth book very well and integrated Favian in flawlessly. Oh, and thank you so much for reviewing my story! I really appreciated your review.

I applaude you for this story. Its awesome. Just like youre really there with all the people at Hogwarts. Its also great how Favian jsut plopped herself in there and got ahead of everyone and became the best part. You did an awesome job of making the book come to life and putting a lot into it. A lot of yourself and a lot of fun stuff tho, which is also yourself. I especially liked that you made Fred and George more important. I always thought they should be, but maybe thats jsut because I always wished I was a twin. Its great that you made Favian sexy, yet mean, and sometimes the sweetest peron ever. One thing tho, sometimes its a lottle confusing whose talking. When theres a lot of people speaking, and its for a long time that theyre talking, sometimes I jsut cant understand whos doing the talking. But maybe thats jsut me. Well, good job, and I hope you write more soon.

Thats fun stuff right there dear neggbor. Ew tho, the mountague kids is so ugly in the movies. Really, that poor girl, i would have bit him, or grabbed and pulled or something. But yes, I would have cried about it a lot too. Its also halarious that everyone thinks americans are **. Well, they propbably do anyway, but you make it funny. For us tho, not for Favian. Well, this is wherre I stop reading for now, I just hope to only have good dreams, and not scary ones. Especially ones of thats nasty slytherin kid kissing me, or anyone else.

Kissing Voldemort. never would have thought of it, yet of course you did. Good thing you made him sexy tho, and not the ugly face in her dreams. I think that dream was definetly my favorite part of the whole thing so far. It felt like I was in it again, but this was a good dream, not one with a scary face.

Flying? I wish I could do that! And talking to a stone man, sounds like fun. Too bad Favian had to meet Umbridge tho, she does suck. Keep making the twins seem cute, youre doing a good job of it so far. I just cant say Ive ever dreamed about eggs. But who knows, maybe I will tonight.

That whole Voldemort being in her dream, was really really scary. Like I dreamed it. And I dont normally, well ever, dream of those kind of things. Scary things I mean. Good job, its like you made Favians dream come alive.

I like that all the boys talk to Favian, and that shes not in on all of Harry, Ron, and Hermiones secrets. It also gives her more time to talk ot the boys. I especially like thats shes friends with George and Fred, theyve always been two of my favotires. Just how they act and how they dont really care what trouble they get into. And theyre funny. Almost as funny as the writer!

Yes well, lets say that Ive done more readig than actually reviewing, but I still love your story. Its so funny. I mean, after reading the Harry Potter books, who hasnt thought of putting them selves im there?? Or maybe Im just one of those weird ones that has. Haha well, I really like your main charecter, Favian, shes like you Katie! Thats why I love her so much! Except that you dont have acne. Which is good, but we would still love you if you did. I also like how Favian is our age, or at least mine, and shes still with all of the older people of Hogwarts. I wondered how that would work, a 15 yr old with a bunch of 11 yr olds, but you fixed me firhgt up with that question. So its all ok now. My only complaint is, she is too good. Favian sounds like she can do ANYTHING! Which isnt always bad, but people always have at least one fault, and so far I havent seen one with her. Overall, its good tho, and I like that this isnt your normal everyday story either. Awesome job!

Its interesting so far, and kidna weird. But mostly weird in a good way. M I think Ill jsut keep reading it.