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Blue Ducky
2004-07-23 . chapter 12
wow! your fic is really good. you should continue. i see you haven't updated in a really long time. don't forget about this story! it's way to good. your writing style is very unique and this is a very original idea for a story. i like it a lot and i hope you continue this story!
Pedagogie
2003-12-11 . chapter 12
this is awsome. great chapter
update i can't wait to see what Fudge has to say
Mira (too lazy to sign on)
2003-12-11 . chapter 12
O! This is so gd, I love this fic!! Please please update soon!
AbbieNormal182
2003-12-08 . chapter 12
*aw* oh lord, I'm almost in tears. Sirius was my very favourite character in the whole thing.
Suggestion: Lucius Malfoy. True, he won't be feeling badly about it, but you could portray his feelings as it is.. :D
You are an amazing writer, this was very very good...
Abbie
AbbieNormal182
2003-12-08 . chapter 5
*Bursts into noisy sobs* *sniff* Stupid man... had to die, didn't he... just had to!! I hold with what you said at the start... SOB... Anyway, I promise I'll finish this, hopefully later tonight... :D
Abbie
Space Oddity
2003-11-29 . chapter 5
aw! poor remus wolfman! *tear* its so sad! poor him and harry! they have it the worst!
Space Oddity
2003-11-29 . chapter 2
gr i hate rowling for killing sirius off and if was such a good writer then she didn't "have" to... gr! lol sorry im venting... dont mind me... btw i like the first chappie./
kantomon
2003-09-14 . chapter 11
Awesome job, I knew you were gonna do a letter to Sirius anyway. Maybe to Lily or James, in all their sadness? Or Hagrid? Cool pen name, I should really change mine. Please update soon!
Silvestra
2003-09-12 . chapter 12
Wow, Sapphrine!! This was amazing!! Actually I was pretty inspired by this series that I'm going to write one which is pretty similar to this :) hope you don't mind. It's about Sirius' death as well... I still haven't got over it yet :(

Anyhoo, keep writing as you have some real talent!!

Love, your friend Silvestra
Orlandoluv
2003-09-09 . chapter 1
Love the poem!
Amie-Black
2003-09-09 . chapter 11
Great job! I cried a lot. And the ending was preferct.

Amie-Black

P.S.~ I loved the poem! ^_^
Zaphra Ti'Gan
2003-09-08 . chapter 11
Oh that was so sad. I'm glad you finally updated I've been waiting for this one for a long time (being that Tonks is one of my favorite characters). Keep up the good work and update again soon, Please.
luv4snuffles
2003-09-06 . chapter 11
very nice chapter, you have done a great job on isolating the reasons why each character had their faults in sirius' death. maybe tonks can write to andromeda wait, isnt she dead? i dont remember. anyways, were running out of characters and i have no idea who else, maybe someone else from the order, or maybe bill! or charlie! im not sure...
Pedagogie
2003-09-06 . chapter 11
that was really good. i feel all sad now. you've given me an idea for a fict. i don't want it to be copying in any way though. i wanted to do more peoples reactions and feelings than blaming themselves. anyhow update soon this is one of my favorite fics. i hope you decide to write more
SeraphAngel
2003-09-06 . chapter 11
Oh, how sad... This is really good. Please continue!
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