|Reviews for The Legend of the Jolly Roger|
| JaneBooth 9/19/03 . chapter 2
AH! It make's a lot more sense now. The second chapter make it alot more clearer and solves most of the problems i had with it. I get the story now. lol She's eaten by a water bottle? Hehehe. Alrite well. Keep up the good work! Since ya gott me interested an all.
Capt. Jane Booth
| JaneBooth 9/19/03 . chapter 1
Don't take this the wrong way luv, but this was god damn confussing. I was lost in like the third paragraph. Sorry. Also. It's kinda hard to read wiht all those little icons. I kept having to reread what i just read to figure out what ye , don't take this the wrong way. But I totally don't get yur story. I'm so lost! Maybe its just me! Delete this if ye want.
Capt. Jane Booth
| Lydea Kwan 8/27/03 . chapter 1
This was okay, but the format's screwed up. Puhleeze fix!
| Sage of Hairspray 7/21/03 . chapter 2
Bahahahaha! She got eaten by the water bottle! Ahahaha! ..hoo... sorry.
Hmm. Can't think of anything to pass judgement on as of yet. Doesn't look bad.
| Quiet One 7/21/03 . chapter 2
Ack! I'm so sorry its taken me so long to reivew!I didn't mean for it to, but alas, I've been super busy. _ Lets see, this chapter was really good, I liked how you jumped back and forth between the two story lines. Plus, yourstyle is good. I can't wait until they meet. (As I assume is going to happen anyway.) Well, keep posting!
| Jamie 7/17/03 . chapter 2
this is interesting. Please continue. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Jamie 7/13/03 . chapter 1
Please continue. Its really good so far.
| Quiet One 7/13/03 . chapter 1
Intersting... I'm curious to see where this is going. Would you mind terribly just dropping me a note when you update? Keep writing!
| Fallen-Dreamer1 7/11/03 . chapter 1
Wowza this is good! You must right more & soon. When a prolouge is good you know the whole story will be. *smiles* Post more soon!