AH! It make's a lot more sense now. The second chapter make it alot more clearer and solves most of the problems i had with it. I get the story now. lol She's eaten by a water bottle? Hehehe. Alrite well. Keep up the good work! Since ya gott me interested an all.

Capt. Jane Booth

Don't take this the wrong way luv, but this was god damn confussing. I was lost in like the third paragraph. Sorry. Also. It's kinda hard to read wiht all those little icons. I kept having to reread what i just read to figure out what ye , don't take this the wrong way. But I totally don't get yur story. I'm so lost! Maybe its just me! Delete this if ye want.

Farewell.

Capt. Jane Booth

This was okay, but the format's screwed up. Puhleeze fix!

Bahahahaha! She got eaten by the water bottle! Ahahaha! ..hoo... sorry.

Hmm. Can't think of anything to pass judgement on as of yet. Doesn't look bad.

Ack! I'm so sorry its taken me so long to reivew!I didn't mean for it to, but alas, I've been super busy. _ Lets see, this chapter was really good, I liked how you jumped back and forth between the two story lines. Plus, yourstyle is good. I can't wait until they meet. (As I assume is going to happen anyway.) Well, keep posting!

Quiet One

this is interesting. Please continue. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Please continue. Its really good so far.

Intersting... I'm curious to see where this is going. Would you mind terribly just dropping me a note when you update? Keep writing!

Quiet One

Wowza this is good! You must right more & soon. When a prolouge is good you know the whole story will be. *smiles* Post more soon!