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XxShinemegamixX
2004-03-28 . chapter 7
i do have an idea of a person to set up with Yusuke...(even though my fave bishi is Kurama..but hes with you...) you can put me in the story! heres my bio if you need it:
Real World Bio:
Name:(i go by these 2 names.i dont really like my first name) Rose and Ayame
Age:13(almost 14)
Height: about 5'5
Weight:(not telling!)
Looks: I have a little past shoulder length brown hair with natural highlights of lighter brown,darker brown and a little blonde.My eyes are silverish blue.
Personality: Im a loyal,semi friendly person.I have a kinda short temper and im quiet and a bit shy.(if theres anything else you want to know about my real world bio email me at: renaishtar@wmconnect.com)
Anime Bio:
Name:Ayame,Rose,Serenity(and many others but Ayame is my main one.)
Age:16
Height: 5'4
Weight:(not telling!)
Looks: I have blonde hair down to mid-back and i still have silverish blue eyes.I have semi tan skin.
Other: Im the last of the Void Kitsunes(i got that from Emona DragonDancer) and my powers are dimensional manipulation and pretty much anything that involves the dark..or well...the void.When i allow my demon form to surface i get darkblue streaks in my hair and i have darkblue ears and tail.My eyes are midnight blue with gold and silver flecks.(Personality is pretty much the same except im more outgoing and a bit more firendly.)
Please consider putting my character in your story!! Id be really honored if you would! Thanks for taking the time to read my review!
And my closing quote:
"NO ONE IS A VIRGIN CUZ LIFE SCREWS US ALL!"
And my signiture goodbye:
Baiz and Later Days!
blooberrybree
2004-02-09 . chapter 1
Umm...YUCK!
This story reaks real bad. Self-insertions suck real bad. This sucks...YuYuHaku fanfics are ment to be written bout the charcters Yoshihiro Togashi-san created, not YOU! I agree with the negative flamers!
denise
2004-01-02 . chapter 1
WTF?! please stop mary-sue because you aint cute at all.
P.S. HIEI IS MINE! MUHAHA! *runs of with hiei*
Can we say LOSER?!
2003-10-25 . chapter 7
Ok self-insertion are GOOD is you don't suck at them - but you reak. You make yourself perfect (Mary-Sue fic right here) and then you make Kurama fall in love with you?! HA! Dream on! Anyway, just don't pair Kieko up with Yusuke...you've already ruined the other pairings.
Bonnie-Connie
2003-09-01 . chapter 7
Crap.I hate self-insertions.

Kurama is really OOC
Cute Anime Kitty
2003-08-27 . chapter 7
Cool More please!
Cute Anime Kitty
2003-08-27 . chapter 6
So sweet, I LOVE JIN & KURAMA
Kuramie and Kaiaramith
2003-08-21 . chapter 1
this great
Kuramie and Kaiaramith
2003-08-21 . chapter 7
This is great please update and 'trapped in a buring building'
Kagome Kaori Gryffindor
2003-08-20 . chapter 7
I'll go out with Yusuke, I believe you already have my info ^_^ anyways, really good story, kinda confusing at times, since there's so many long paragraphs, maybe you could...make more paragraphs or something...y'know so they wouldn't be so long.
darkness
2003-08-19 . chapter 7
that is so SWEET.
oOKeairaOo
2003-08-17 . chapter 7
Okay, I just have to say this, and I'm going to try to do it in the nicest way possible. And I don't care if you want to e-mail me back later and yell at me for it, because I would be happy to discuss it with you.

Self insertions... are BAD.

I mean really. And I'm not just saying this because I like yaoi. This story would be better even if it were a Kurama/Botan or a Kurama/OC. I can even handle Mary-Sue's better than I can self insertions.

Putting yourself in a story is just... stupid. Unless, of course, the story has humor as the main genre. Then, it's okay.

But just... please, give it up. I really tried to read it with an open mind, but... God...

~Keaira~

P.S.: Also, Kurama is REALLY OOC.
Rakuzen
2003-08-17 . chapter 7
Update soon!All you stupid flamers this is a really good story!You better take back what you said!Sorry I hate flamers.Can I be in the story I already E-mailed you about it.Oh yeah flamers I bet your stories suck!Well Ja ne!~Sasami9876
Tragedy Ann
2003-08-15 . chapter 6
hehe It's so cool that you put yourself in this fic! it shos you really have imagination and talent and don't listen to the bad reviewers
I'm sure Kurama would fall in love with you you sound like his type ^_^
*sticks tongue out at other reviewer*
Silver Foxglove
2003-08-09 . chapter 5
::listens to Jin's song:: Sorry...::blinks:: Jin's a badguy? ::pouts:: He's one of my favorite chars. Good story. Karasu is creepiness, not really much else to say, ne? Good so far, later

~~Silver Foxglove
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