This story broke my heart. It's really well written, and there aren't enough well written Dark Angel fics.

This was so angsty, sad. And it feels really like Max and Logan (sadly, not in the way I like to see them)

Wonderful.

I have read this story several different times and it never fails to impress me. This is such a good story, you've done a wonderful job!

Great story. :D

What a strange story! It was really good though because you were thinking outside the box in an AU. If you wrote more of these, I would love to read them.
BTW, this is the first story I have ever read on fanfiction net. I have been writing fanfiction for almost five years and have never been here.
It's nice that yours was my first.
Great job!
Barb

that has to be with out a doubt the best fic i have ever read on this site. the depth, the realisations the darkness that set the mood through out it. a clam sense of danger dawned on me when i was reading absorbed in the world you had created.

i have never ever seen Max portrayed to darkly, so unemotionless, yet she felt a sense of regret or something very similar to it.

i loved that fact that Logan was not afraid to die, and that his death is going to haunt his murdorer for the rest of her life.

the last five lines really made an impact i loved this sooooo much and (i may be repeating myself here) with out a doubt this is the best fucking fic Dark Agel fic – or any for that matter that i have ever read in my entire life.

ME

Usually I'm more into the happier stories, but I must say that this was fantastic piece of fanfiction.

Looking through Limona's favorite stories, I found this, and... wow. Absoltely magnificent. It was really nice to read a Max that was even darker than I've ever made her, and a Logan that's wiser and nobler than I've ever seen him portrayed. Grammatically this was pretty much flawless, and the writing flowed very well. This is, quite honestly, one of the best things I've ever read on this site (but then again, my tastes do tend toward the dark).

That was an amazing story! Very very very well written, and, even though I was *sniff* sad about Logan's death, it was an amazing plotline, too. AWESOME job!

Lady M.

This is by far the best AU fic written. VERY dark in a good way. (like Pollo Loco) I especially liked all the imagery you put in your story. I could actually picture Max's "cold" demeanor. The whole idea of heartless genetic soldiers is scary huh? Cryptic, eerie, just great. Whatever happened to the 4th installment, BTW? Thanks for the story. It's really enjoyable. :-)

Oooh, dark! That is pretty freaky. Are you an F.S. Fitzgerald fan? I loved the Ice Palace theme you had ging on. Very cool :)

neat story:0)

Wow. This is an amazing story! So realistic and dark, and the metphor is stunningly accurate.

That was SO awesome! Wow! I've gotta go read the sequal now!