i don't get the endding that much.

i smelt the changing leaves' woody musk, i gasped as i beheld the magnificient display of firey colors in all their brilliance spread before me. my heart swelled, the altitude in which we were flying, the scenery, awed by the jagged peaks beneath us...

my mission: read all rk fics by author alphebetically... if an author has talent, if that author can paint emotions, worlds, and people with his/her words, not only do i read as many of their stories that i find interesting (aka: inuyasha, labyrinth, etc.), but i also bookmark their profile page into a file labeled "MASTERS"... master artists... like: van gogh, monet, da vinci, rockwell, picasso, dali, matisse, o'keeffe, rubens, lautrec, etc... every one different, unique, amazing! you are now numbered among them.

sincerely,
ginny

that was very good

Kind of weird, very different. I like it. ^^;;

Cool. Please update. You have such a good way of putting things.

Very lovely written. Unique that you don't use the verb 'to be'. Whatever has it done to you for you to hate it so?? Jk jk. Very well written. Very nice ending. The grammer is suberb. All in all I enjoyed it *very* much. Keep up the excellent work. Live, Love, and then get Real. Ja!

~Lady Kitsune Karma

Not that bad a story, very orignal it might just be worth tracking.

I really enjoyed your story. I hope that you add more chapters. I liked how you showed a softer side to Sesshomaru.