""We'll think of something." Lydia had a seat on the couch next to Jacques. "We always think of something."

"And," remarked Beetlejuice, "in usually under half an hour!""

roflmao Best. Lines. Ever. XD

lol Nice start. Meg O'Byte'd fit right in with the cartoon, wouldn't she? XD

I absolutely loved that story. I like Bridge over the river water to. Fyi, i first found you about a 2-3 weeks ago, while on animated lust, and then i read your story, and i was hooked. i didn't even remember about BJ till i saw animated lust. I couldn't tell you how great a story writer you were till i found you, just now. Just wondering, do you Really have a crush on BJ, because it kinda sounds like you do, not that i mind, i'm just curious. keep up the great work.

ps, i'm rewriting your story into my book, it was that good.

pps, please reply to this message.

Lovely, yet again. I love seeing Lydia and Beetlejuice interact, like

"Now, Beej," she said slyly, "you should have thought of that before we left the Roadhouse."

Beetlejuice shot Lydia an amused glance.

Little things like that, and the Monster's accent. Lovely.

I'll put you on my Alert list Just In Case you decide to write more in this fandom. Thanks. :)

Oh, this was good... This was real good... I'm glad Lyds is still alive, though that would have put a new twist on the new story... :) ANyhow, not sure if you're surprised to get a review on this at this date, but hey, it is the first time I've read it...

"I wonder if a large, fast moving freight train could fix that... ANd I love how he seems to know he's in a cartoon, just like the actual cartoon! Yay!

My god! It's Sparky! I've been to almost all your fan-websites, read everything...and I printed this so long ago...but now I have an FF account so I can tell you what a genius you are.

Hehe that was great

Nicely done. I couldn't see a single spelling error the whole thing through. I haven't seen the show in a long time and I miss it something fierce. This story actually came as a surprise to me. I was at your beetlejuice website and I clicked on the fanfiction link. Little did I suspect that it would lead here. I actually did a double take. Then I realized the opportunity of reviewing some serious professional work. Overall I rate this a full dark shadow on the Genesis Shadow ranking system (Patent pending). This is the first official shadow on the list. Huzzah! That aside, I am going to check out any other stories of yours. This one was good, and I think the others will be as well. Could you perhaps take a look at my work? If you do, I must warn that they start out kind of (Eh.). They get better, and I'm fixing them now so they have proper starting status.

With a flurry of Ice, Wind, and Snow from an eternal blizzard, I silently make my exit. I am:
Lord Genesis Shadow.

What a cute fanfic! Great ideas!

Beetlejuice fanfics? Gotta love 'em!

This was mighty impressive to me. You not only got the characters down, but the conversations were exactly what you might except them to be saying. I bow to your brilliance. :: bows::

Awesome fic! I loved it! Just like an episode of the cartoon! It had a very fun story line, and I had a lot of fun reading it ^-^

~Fiona Fargazer~

*giggles* Cute. Very, very cute. Lydia + juice powers = of the good. Nice work!

I normally don't review until the end, but I HAD to comment on this chapter.

"We'll think of something." Lydia had a seat on the couch next to Jacques. "We always think of something."

"And," remarked Beetlejuice, "in usually under half an hour!"

THAT WAS AWESOME. :D