Hey. I read the version of this story that was on the ML for Vandread. I liked that one better. Of course, that's because there was more Dita and Hibiki interaction in it. That's major brownie points for me. If you are not going to continue this story, please let somebody else do it. Although, I know nobody could do it as well as you. I've decided that you are my all-time favorite author out of everyone. Good job.

This story has elements of my review for Untitled in it. I think you know what I mean. I'll put it as simply as I can. You. Kick. Freakin. **. You. Are. The. Best. At least, that's what I think. But one person can change many.

Grr... So much for an "Epic serial". I had high hopes that this wouldn't be another one of those stupid stories where the author doesn't finish, but I guess I was wrong. What's more, it is an excellently written one as well, but you STILL didn't finish it. Seriously man, I can't tell you what kind of hopes I had for this story. You're in the top three of all the writer's on this site to me, and I was VERY excited to hear that this would be a Hibiki/Dita serial, (I agree with you it really seems like there are a lot more Hibiki/Meia stories) hoping that this could possibly be as good as the Great Soulimpaired's tales, (which, incidentally, have also pretty much been abandoned, what a shame...), but alas, it would appear that my hopes were all for naught. Hell, there's only the slimmest of chances that you will even SEE this review, you been away from this story for so long I'm surprised you'd even remember it.

What an awful, awful shame that such great writer such as you and others decide to abandon these marvellous stories. At least other such as Kamikaze Wraith have the decency (I'm sorry but I'm really ticked) to notify us that a story will no longer be continued, and not just leave your fans hanging.

Perhaps if you see this little review of mine, maybe there's still a small chance that this fic will rise from the grave and live on (God willing), but until now, thanks for nothing.

At least what was written was extremely good. I just wish there was more...

another great story from a great story teller thats all i have to say A+

Please Update.

Please continue this story.

Nicely done..

Although there a a few typos its a good fic

just waiting to be read.

The descriptions and scenes are well done

I won't be surprise if this is going to be one of the best Vandread fanfic in FF.net.

Nicly done, exelent describtion. At this rate this fic has a very good chance at becoming one of the best, if not the best vanfanfics on F.F.Net.

Good job, by the way is the story taking place before or after the end of the Second Stage. plese update soon.

Well done, it was worth the effort.Pls update soon.

Keep updating this fic has an exelent start.