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| buttonlover972 2004-06-06 ch 2, | abusei don't know... i guess this chapter would have been good in the story... i admit that when i turned from chapter ten to eleven it did seem sort of abrupt to go right to the celebration feast... but it's still good the way it is! {>__ |
| buttonlover972 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abuseya.. this was also a GREAT beginning for the story... but I do admit that i liked the one that you used for the story better.. i don't know why though.. {>__ |
| Nomia 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abusenot bad. it's certainly a lot better than some OTHERS that i've read. |