Powerful, good and certainly worth continuing. Lovin it!

I really liked this story its great so far keep writing it !

good story if you want to read a funny one read mine

that's a really kool story ! keep writing

ok. a good start i guess. Though you move on to quickly, and you really need to use your imagination more...you depend too much on Rowling and use her ideas to the extreme. try development of her ideas...dont steal them all as it gets repetative and boring.

dude! ya gotta rite more. sry for bein so to the point, but do! u cant just rite the thingy about the book and then leave it at that! rite MORE!

it sounds really good so far btw...

Write more!

VERY good! Please keep writing, I like it a lot!

not bad... actually i feel you have captured some magic

if you are after more reviews change the settings so it doesnt have to be a signed review

please continue