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| Black Wolf Chic 2 2004-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThese are good. By the way my story has been updated. |
| cheesecrackers 2004-01-15 ch 7,  | abuseFinally read all your poems, didn't want to review each chapter and fill up your mailbox, but yeah we like the last one, the opinion one. The senses come through this one. Wonderful poems! Did you get good marks for these ones? Or were they just written at home? Anyway, we hope you got good marks if it was for school!! :o) :o). |
| cheesecrackers 2004-01-15 ch 4, | abuseLoved the Alliteration and the Catalogue one! All we can say is, we like it a lot. Hehehe, cheetahs trip? Baby cheetahs buckling legs right? |
| cheesecrackers 2004-01-15 ch 3, | abuseThe Old and the Young... hmm... didn't get this one fully. Maybe a bit thick, but why is the young laughing and smiling? Never mind. Dogs one's simple, but it works. |
| cheesecrackers 2004-01-15 ch 2, | abuseLOL, The Chunky Black Cat limerick was hilarious! We just love limericks! The War and Peace was very cool too. We like how you started off with War then progressing to diplomacy in the middle and thren finally to Peace. Don't know about the laughter though... when is there laughting in War? Is it like evil laugh or hysterical laugh? Still great! |
| cheesecrackers 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThe words in Sun Rising was good. We can really see the image of a beach and the sun in the horizon. We like it a lot. Very peaceful. The second one, "Darness Disappears" was good, but we like the first one more. |
| matato 2003-11-01 ch 2, | abuseHi yea i like u'r poems their really good and yea, um... you probably won't read this o well but i really like u'r war and peace. yea i want to write poems too. but i dunno, but those pointers or the little blurbs at the begining really is helpful. yea Umm that's all i wanted to really say. But these are really good. U should write more. inspire me. lol anyway you shoud write more and let it have mor publicity. WEll i did reviw cuz you were like PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cya, brb-or-not P.S thank you for reviewing to my story. |
| dashgirl 2003-10-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| misakichi1 2003-07-26 ch 4, | abuseNice poems! i had to write a poem book last year (fifth grade *shudder*) and these are MUCH better than mine... so... nice job! |
| squished-by-me 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusenice poems! It's hard to write good poetry...great work! -Jane |
| Mdek 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuse?? poems are ok i guess? (? no clue what they mean?) |