 Adi88 2006-02-13 . chapter 1Snoopy dance. I love it. Very poignant. All philosophical and everything, and sad and practical. But little hope-notes. |
 Truthahn 2005-11-18 . chapter 1 There are no words to describe this fanfiction... it is perfect in every way! |
 Jessiegurl43953 2004-12-29 . chapter 1Perfect! Absolutely beautiful! This is a flawless description of who Yuki is! ::cuddles this fic:: |
 GhostHelwig 2004-08-10 . chapter 1Beautiful. Just beautiful. And a very unique but very -true- way of seeing Yuki & his life... The last line especially was just lovely... I feel bad for both Haru & Yuki, that things work in that way, & yet, Haru is closer to Yuki's heart than anyone else... I know I said it already, but truly, this was beautiful. |
 Skye0906 2003-07-21 . chapter 1Hey Mel-kun ^_^.
Every time I read this, I'm amazed by your ability to self-reflect on a character, that although I've never seen him, I feel like I've touched a part of his mind, and can love him for it.
One can really feel for Yuki, especially with these lines:
~~For wanting the life that made a little boy cry endless nights alone, begging not to be a prince, a leader, a status, a symbol. He didn't want to be adored, or loathed, or seen. Just to exist, as himself, alone.~~
And again, the inkling into the Yuki/Haru relationship was just touched upon, but enough to get one's curiosity peaked. I really hope I can watch the series soon.
I loved the happy-ish ending, where after all he's been through, Yuki was able to find that little part of him that was solely him...and wouldn't you know, it also tied him to Haru ^_~.
~~And beneath all the layers of sacrifice for the greater good of others and their needs, the part that was solely Yuki-the one he kept sacred and immovable as his cornerstone of himself-found he had loved Haru in return.~~
*lights another candle at the MelFicAltar*
~Skye |
 Gia 2003-07-14 . chapter 1This was lovely, really. ^_^ |
 peroxidepest17 2003-07-14 . chapter 1You know how much a positively adore this fic, don't you? I swear, every time I write any Fruits Basket regarding Yuki or Haru, I reference it. Because it's sad, and sweet, and makes me want to reach out and cuddle Yuki because he's so angsty. *laugh* And to add, because you know I can't resist, *throws confetti* Welcome to the Pit! :) |
 Yui Miyamoto 2003-07-13 . chapter 1Wonderful and more wonderful.
I hope you will write more about this pairing. ^_^
*presses key to put on favorite stories list* |
 Yami girl1 2003-07-13 . chapter 1so sweet!! Write more please. |
 Joydrop 2003-07-12 . chapter 1That was interesting, and oddly cute in a strange sort of way. Write more? ^_^ |
 Sadistic otaku 2003-07-12 . chapter 1Wow! This is really good! I liked how you described Yuki's life and his lookout on this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) |
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