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| AnneWithane 2004-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi! As usual, your writing pulls me into the lives of the characters involved. I find myself wanting to know more about this girl, and what happens next. Will he honor her second request? I confess I've only read a couple of the books, and don't know nearly as much about the HP world as most folks do, but this story sucks me right in anyway. :-) Nice job! You even make Lucius sound kinda hot, and I'd *never* thought that before. LOL |
| FERAL90 2004-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseomg that was fantastic you have to write more... i seriously really really liked it. ive read storys about lucius malfoy and his 'mistress' and yours is the only really interesting one..and well written..at least in my opinion anyways but keep on writing its really good ~.~D~>`** |
| L. M. Lachance 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseLet me clue you in on a little secret... I'd like you much better if you continued it. Hypocritical of me to ask for more, when I haven't continued my work for months, but please... |
| infinity8 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI really loved it. More? |
| Lunaria 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was such a wonderfully written chapter. My attention was held tight. Your description of their relationship was very detailed. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will he say yes? Please update soon. |
| ~Queen of the Faeries~ 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseSomething about this story really got to me. I can't tell you exactly what it is. It's not a particularly original storyline (though from the view of the mistress is a nice touch) and the take on a softer side of Lucius has been done before, but something about your style of writing really brings this piece to life. I don't mean to criticize how cliche it is, those are just examples. The fact that he didn't sleep with her for a couple of years, how she seems to cope with things, those are wonderful details that add a certain flair to your writing, and your particular style really makes this an enjoyable piece to read. I hope you will update. |
| MeghanJinx 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis... I can't even bring myself to review. I can't even bring myself to... even rip it apart. There was no plot, your summary was so riddled with errors I almost vomited... this is a prime example of why all the good authors left ff.n. You should really be ashamed of yourself for calling this a fic. *Ugh.* |