Cake, please.

Wow, excellent job. Really frightening.

Now you gotta stay alive. You gotta scream a little louder.

So he can hear you.”
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This line: golden. Absolutely perfect. Although I haven't actually read the series, so I have no clue who Io Saiko are. My fault. Whatever.

Thumbs up!

I'm extremely happy that you've updated! Granted, it was indeed to shock to see a new chapter has been added, but it was a happy shock. I admire that even though you haven't touched this story in such a long time you can still continue writing it in the same tone. Your character development is wonderful.

If it's not too much to ask, please inform me if you want to start posting newer chapters in your livejournal instead.

omg yes it has been so long
I don't even remember what happened before. This is all one long flashback, right? He's in Konoha really, right?

Ah well.

I love your diction and syntax. It beats the ** out of anything and everything.
Except you called the seal on him a "dark mark". haha.

LJ is awesome for dirtyness. linklinklink. Or username, w/e.

Sasuke torture! Whoo!

*sniffles*
Man, you made me late for uni now. And there's only one week left of the term too and Im behind in my work...

still, it was worth it

5 years, huh?

Hell. I liked it. Lots of vague reasons why.

As a Sasuke-return fic, it felt both fresh and new- and accurate- and perfectly unreal in exactly the right way.

There's a dizzy, euphoric stream of consciousness feeling to your writing.. I really like it a lot. I especially like all the candy-coated rockn'roll-esque metaphors, that whole thematic element. It's the kind of thing that plays around in my head when I think of messed up, wild kids like Sasuke and Naruto, but the sort of aesthetic I didn't have the guts to use in my story, since I worried it wouldn't fit the mood.

I really like it, though. Ever see the movie 'Kids'? It reminded me of that. *fav*

OMFG OMFG OMFG!

you are amazing.

This fic is so beautiful. I can't describe it the way I would like to. And your words are so powerful. I seriously felt moved in the first chapter. Overall, your writing is simply incredible. Great job!

i'm starting to think that you're not updating this baby on purpose...

damn, this was the story that got me addicted to naruto-fics in the firt place... like 2 and something years ago

I lost this story, found it, lost it again...by default found it, just started to read it all over once more... I remember it being twisted but damn good, not the standard sort of thing...

it would be seriously great if you'd update it, cuz damn, even after all these years compared to others it's friggin great AND the reviews hadn't stopped comming in for you...

think about it and write something up... hell, write a leave-me-the-**-alone-this-**-will-never-be-updated-AGAIN note, but don't leave such a cliffy...

good luck with whatever you do, but think about it, key?

xMar

Hi there!

Someone rec'ed this to me,and I finally got around to reading. *wry grin* Anyway, I love this story--it's very well written, and the images are quite nice.

I run an archive and I was hoping you'd let me archive this? the URL is tentative[dot]net[slash]JBMcDragon[slash]Hidden_Village--or you can just click over to my author page, and the link is there. ;)

Thank you!

JB

absolutely wonderful story. I can't help but feel for Sasuke.

This is a cool story. Dark, violent, and depressing for the young Uchiha fans, but I like it a lot. Update soon.*favs*

This story is absolutely amazing. *_* I love the style of it, the moving back and forth in time to slowly divulge what happened. And Sasuke's reactions are so realistic! The ordeal didn't turn him into a weepy, pathetic mess, he's still HIM. Damaged, definitely, but still himself. I really can't wait to read more of this. I hope you update soon!

i can't believe how long it has been since you've updated this story! i've just spent the last hour or so reading the whole 11 chapters, and i was shocked when i discovered that you had stopped! and this was when me eyes were practically glued to the screen, completely engrossed in your story! this is such a good fic, and i love reading sasuke torture ones even though he's my favourite character. Please, please continue! Or else I'll have to send sasUKE yaoi fangirls on you...and i know quite a few! :P *adds to faves*

The angst! ;_; It makes me sad. It's very pretty, though. I do hope you're planning to update this. ._. It's really good.