That was so cute :)

this is a really good story and you should carry on with more chpters

marie

Your story has a lot of potenial (no pun intended). Keep going.

WAT R U WAITIN' 4 RITE NEXT CHAPTER... NOW! NOW! I SAID NOW!

Write some more

Please continue this, and let me know when you've updated!

I love seeing a conflicted Xander. Bravo.

Another chapter, another chapter, pleaase! This is so great, I love it!

Absolutely worth a second chapter! I love it!

Aw...this is a really beautiful fic...you got Xander's character down pat. Has wicked promise and please write another chapter, coz complete lack opn Dander lovin' on the net!

Yay! A D/X fic, and a good one at that! I'm a D/X shipper all the way and would be thrilled if you continued it, there aren't enough D/X fics out there! Keep up the wonderful job so far!

yes! you must write a second one and when you do let me know ;) it's really good. mabye Dawn should wake up..mh. Really good job though

Good start! Feel free to off any of the SITs you feel like getting rid of.

Okay, i cant imagine x liking d, cos he treats her like hes her big brother, or young uncle, or something. BUT this is a really really gogeous beautful fic, its sweet and cute, and id never complain abt it, so youd better wriet a secand chapter, cos it totaly rox.

Anything that is a Xander/Dawn paring is worth continuing. I love this story, truly I do. There are just not enough stories out there with Xander and Dawn as a couple. Please, please continue this.

Very cute and sweet.

There is an extreme lack of D/X fic on the net so when I saw this, it made me extremly happy:)

More please!