This is a wonderful story! I love it!

Oh, but you need to update all your Krillin and 18 fics. Now that FF has expanded the DBZ character list, your stories are categorized as Krillin and #16. Lol.

I bookmarked this story and when I get back into my old account here (If I can rememeber it) then I'll fave this one.'

4/5 (Format it and you can get that last point *wink, wink*)

Why is it you enjoy taking Sevs... and torturing the sprockets out of him? I wonder. Maybe it's because you're freakishly good at it? Is that it? Cuz you are. Very good. Very very good.

I hafta write something Seventeenish now... I tried once, and it wasn't pretty... I couldn't get him to sound playful and murderous at the same time, you know? I blocked out. Finally had to make it about Gohan! Oi.

Hey, read my freakishly long epic poem, Not Quite The End, and give me your expert opinion on Sev's portrayal. Please? I'll crack down on Cheechron and write you a pretty 17 poem!

Later Acey!

This was awesome! I loved it! Juunana-kun is my favorite character, too. _ Great job!

Wow good job Acey! This was a whole lot better then my poor attempt at writing a fic on which 17 reflects on his sister. Keep up the good work _

That was really good. I have to say that I liked it. It's good hearing a different point of view about their marrage.

That was so good! Great job Acey!*